{reviewid: 1159903, reviewer: 'hermione%26ron4ever'}
10th October 2006:
Were is the rest of the story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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{reviewid: 957487, reviewer: 'frannybaby'}
12th April 2006:
Wow. Haha. That was good!
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{reviewid: 946698, reviewer: 'dewdrops_lily'}
21st March 2006:
that was funny and great
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{reviewid: 872602, reviewer: 'AP'}
24th January 2006:
you just recently read the outsiders, didn't you. that's such a good book! Nice story! :)
Author's Response: lol no, but I love that book, and the name soda. Thank you hun.
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{reviewid: 839374, reviewer: 'Prongs58'}
3rd January 2006:
this was good!
Author's Response: Thank you :)
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{reviewid: 839197, reviewer: 'potters_girl69'}
3rd January 2006:
aw - cute... please write more. its well writen and to the point :D i liked it !update soon
Author's Response: :P thank you, i try.
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{reviewid: 834059, reviewer: 'MizPotterk'}
30th December 2005:
This is really cool! I can imagine that happening. Please update soon!
Author's Response: lol, thanks, and an update will be soon.
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{reviewid: 833879, reviewer: 'missdradcliffe'}
30th December 2005:
Very interesting.. I cant wait to read more!
Author's Response: :P thank you, im working on the update.
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{reviewid: 833218, reviewer: 'gena'}
30th December 2005:
good keep going
Author's Response: :P you bet I will, thank you.
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{reviewid: 832386, reviewer: 'HermioneOfMuggles'}
29th December 2005:
May want to add something in there about the nickname. I was confused by that 2. just a thought. Happy writing.
Author's Response: :P thank you ill make sure about that.
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{reviewid: 831461, reviewer: '%231harrypotterfan'}
29th December 2005:
how come he keeps calling her cat?
Author's Response: He calls her "Little Cat" he already gave her a nick name, hes flirting.
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{reviewid: 829234, reviewer: 'elle_est_belle'}
28th December 2005:
I think it's really good so far. I like the idea of the story and I think it's very original and interesting. I have some suggestions though about spelling and such. There are places where you have the word "hear" instead of "here" and "there' instead of "their". I hope this helps! Keep up the good work! I really do like this story so far! -ellie
Author's Response: Thanks, im not good at grammer. :) call it a huge flaw.
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{reviewid: 828945, reviewer: 'rowlinghermione'}
27th December 2005:
MORE MORE MORE MORE!!!!! More? please? it sounds REALLY good so far.. please? i want more... its REALLY amazing.. the idea.. wll.. every1 has it, but this 1s different... more please!?!?!?!?!
Author's Response: :) Thank you very much.
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{reviewid: 828705, reviewer: 'qwertyelf'}
27th December 2005:
sweeto!
this shouldn' have been rated Mature for this chapo though!
more like 15+ but chapters with bad words, and secks, well thats different!
Author's Response: Well, there will be some parts though out the whole story that is mature. thank you for reviewing
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{reviewid: 827986, reviewer: 'Felicity'}
27th December 2005:
This seems pretty good so far. There were a few mistakes in grammer and spelling but other than that, pretty good. Hope to see an update soon!
Author's Response: I saw that, thank you.
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{reviewid: 827965, reviewer: 'Ron%27s%20gal'}
27th December 2005:
excellent! contiue!
Author's Response: Why thank you.
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{reviewid: 827935, reviewer: 'invisible_spirit'}
27th December 2005:
good start! i like it =]
Author's Response: thank you :P :)
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{reviewid: 827901, reviewer: 'Dracoschica69'}
27th December 2005:
ohhh..... very good! keep it up and update....well whenever they are out of submission! lol
Author's Response: lol it took so long just to get a fic out.
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{reviewid: 827644, reviewer: 'bananakiwi'}
26th December 2005:
That was great please update soon...
Author's Response: Thank you, and an update is coming
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{reviewid: 827551, reviewer: 'chiquita%20banana'}
26th December 2005:
well I love the story!!!! You need to update it really I totally love it!
Author's Response: Thank you, and Ill update it.
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{reviewid: 827540, reviewer: 'brittany'}
26th December 2005:
ooooooooooo i like it alot
Author's Response: Why thank you.
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{reviewid: 827523, reviewer: 'eVille'}
26th December 2005:
awesome!
Author's Response: :) thank you.
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{reviewid: 827388, reviewer: 'Kandi'}
26th December 2005:
I love the story and everything! it's great! just try to slow down on ur writing a little like don't rush things too much and maybe you won't make as many spelling mistakes. It's beautifully written though..great job!
Author's Response: you kno what, i re-read what I wrote and your right, thank you for catcing me. :) help is always wanted.
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{reviewid: 827377, reviewer: 'TomBrady12'}
26th December 2005:
Oh I love the picture of Kevin Zeggers in your banner and it's real New York you've got. Continue. It's interesting.
Author's Response: Lol, yeah im an old fan of his. :) thank you.
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{reviewid: 827376, reviewer: 'SiMpLe_pLaN_RoCkS'}
26th December 2005:
heyhey! thats so kool. isnt soda pop from the book the outsiders?
Author's Response: Yes, lol, I love that name. :) and the book to.
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