good job. i really got spooked there for a while. keep up the good work Report Review
That was a great story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I love how you make Malfoy a good character, yet still realistic. Bravo, I'm going straight to the sequal. Congrats, you are a superb author!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *^0^* 9/10. To make the story better, I think you could give more description to the way Celine looks. That way, the reader can picture her better.Author's Response: =) Thanks a lot! I suppose I didn't go much into how Celine looks. I should probably improve upon that. Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!! It means a lot to me! Report Review
Liked this! The house was sure scary, You portray Draco in a positive light, and he seems to care for that girl, its a shame that hes father does not want it! Im sure he will find a way around it..
On to read the second part!Author's Response: Ugh, yeah, imagine dreaming you were inside of it. It totally freaked me out!! The things like the laughing portrait were actually in my dream. And yeah, I like it when Draco's made out to be not so evil sometimes. :-) Thanks for reviewing!! Report Review
Wow! That really is dramatic. The dream must have been pretty scary, too.Author's Response: It was very frightening. Thank you for taking the time to read my story and leave a comment! :-) Report Review
Magnifique!!! Bravo!!! Absolutely marvelous! I loved it!Author's Response: ^.^ Thank you!! I'm very glad you liked it!! Report Review
that's a GREAT story and i can't WAIT for the sequel!!! o btw i gots a new Kitty!! her name is baby... tell you more later!!!
Author's Response: I've already started writing the sequel and everything! KITTY! AND OMFG I HAVE TO TELL YOU SOMETHING THAT I GOT FOR CHRISMSTAS OMFFGG LOL!!! Seriously..but umm I probably won't be on tomorrow cuz I'm going to Syracuse with my mom and sister. So I'll tell you when I get home tomorrow night probably. Report Review
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