{reviewid: 2489189, reviewer: 'slytherangoddess'}
4th March 2011:
I like this story so much :D Even though its non-canon. :)
I did find some little fix-it things to watch out for (its the writing major in me):
--Dialogue in a paragraph must match action in a paragraph. Meaning make sure who ever is talking in the paragraph is the one who has the action after the dialogue. Sometimes it was tough to figure out who was talking to whom
--The second is just some spelling and grammar issues. nothing too distracting, but i think there was a "3was" in there somewhere
Other than that I think it was a wonderful fic.
**runs away to review the sequel**
~~Sly~~
OPERATION: Green With Envy
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{reviewid: 2375233, reviewer: 'beep'}
8th July 2010:
um i expected a list
this sucks
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{reviewid: 2374638, reviewer: 'mercibeaucoup'}
7th July 2010:
Woah, your name's Josie?
Hah, that's so cool, so's mine! :D
Anyway, apart from a few small grammatical/spelling mistakes, it was brilliant and entertaining to read.
Thanks (Y)
JOSIE ;) :P
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{reviewid: 2353987, reviewer: 'pooh'}
30th May 2010:
that was a spectacular story...one of a kind
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{reviewid: 2336871, reviewer: 'sofimac16'}
23rd April 2010:
I really liked it... Normally I'm not much of a Draco/Hermione person and I rarely read them.
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{reviewid: 2231110, reviewer: 'Onna_Elwood'}
5th October 2009:
awww! cuteness, i've actually done something similar before! lol...
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{reviewid: 2171545, reviewer: '_hermione_jean_malfoy_'}
23rd July 2009:
OMG! i love this. best story ive read in a while.
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{reviewid: 2153213, reviewer: 'wand_waver'}
1st July 2009:
Wow, very impressive, I don't know if I could have thought up 50.
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{reviewid: 2048308, reviewer: 'ForbiddenBeauty'}
3rd February 2009:
So good, I could so see this on the big screen :)
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{reviewid: 1869234, reviewer: 'rowenaravenclaw94'}
19th March 2008:
good job! interesting interaction between the 2 there... can't wait to read the sequel!
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{reviewid: 1764162, reviewer: 'madam_cee'}
24th December 2007:
Whoa, this was amazing! =) I loved it! 10/10
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{reviewid: 1631107, reviewer: 'brandiemalfoy'}
15th September 2007:
i loved it you could have added corrupted it is really good
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{reviewid: 1611396, reviewer: 'd'}
3rd September 2007:
this is not a story in itself. it's chapter 1 of a two-chapter story. this end does not justify it's completion you see. it's not mysterious, it's untied. otherwise, i really like what you've written
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{reviewid: 1545280, reviewer: 'MistyMagoo'}
31st July 2007:
Oooh, I liked this :) Gotta love a D/Hr fic as good as this one :)
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{reviewid: 1534280, reviewer: 'Amber'}
26th July 2007:
I LOVED IT. It was brilliant. Gonna read teh sequal now ;] Definitly 10/10.
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{reviewid: 1530987, reviewer: 'Iris'}
24th July 2007:
Whoo, I Like It :). I am making a fanfiction by myself about Harry Potter. I've learned that I must write a characterdiscription down before I start with the story. You've helped me alot with Malfoy's & Hermoine's! Thanks!! Btw: I'm Dutch, so maybe this review is not completely correct. Sorry about that ^^'
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{reviewid: 1500634, reviewer: 'iLoveDraco4ever'}
7th July 2007:
dude, this would've made the perfect beggining for a great novel. Really, than t could have worked up and then they owuld really feel atrracted to eachother. Well anyways I give you 5 stars because that was absolutely amazing
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{reviewid: 1470432, reviewer: 'ginny_weasley_54'}
19th June 2007:
i like it
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{reviewid: 1466309, reviewer: 'Monkeymoiz'}
17th June 2007:
OOH! were you watching 10 things I hate about yoy lol
I really love it
It was so funny
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{reviewid: 1457520, reviewer: 'killmedarkworrior'}
10th June 2007:
that was awesome it must have taken a while to come up with 50 insults
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{reviewid: 1456788, reviewer: '_Kaitlyn_'}
10th June 2007:
Very well done. I especially like how Hermione didn't go through with the kissing. 10/10 some of the best writing I've ever seen.
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{reviewid: 1426037, reviewer: 'fantacular_pandemonium'}
20th May 2007:
Ooh...heated! Great job! Going off to read the sequel!
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{reviewid: 1350565, reviewer: 'angelabz'}
22nd March 2007:
its fab 10/1o
can't wait to u update
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{reviewid: 1337684, reviewer: 'Shadow%20Danzer'}
12th March 2007:
LOVE IT!!!
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{reviewid: 1330158, reviewer: 'Lovely_Slytheriness'}
5th March 2007:
This is brilliant! So wrong, but still so right and is some odd way beliveble!! Please continiue this story, it´s great!!
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