{reviewid: 693174, reviewer: 'Ginnysister'}
13th September 2005:
yummmmmmmm good chapter!
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{reviewid: 690628, reviewer: 'Moony%20Padfoot%20Prongs'}
11th September 2005:
Again, it was really rushed. And, I'm glad that you finally started to use Remus' first name instead of just calling him Lupin. Although, you still mainly call him 'lupin'. Anyways...yeah it was rushed.
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{reviewid: 690618, reviewer: 'Moony%20Padfoot%20Prongs'}
| Review #3, by Moony Padfoot Prongs | The Fall |
11th September 2005:
Sorry I didn't sigh this, but wow. That went by really really really fast. And, I just didn't understand it, what with the pace of the story. It just seemed rushed. Yeah...and the language (which doesn't bother me) was used a whole lot....yeah, it was odd. And, I don't get why they all broke up like Lily and james but I think I missed a few chapters.
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{reviewid: 683047, reviewer: 'lilyemraldevans'}
5th September 2005:
aahahhrrr why do people always jude lupin by what he is its not his fault!!!!!
great story!
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{reviewid: 683034, reviewer: 'lilyemraldevans'}
5th September 2005:
very good chapter
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{reviewid: 94515, reviewer: 'Dark%20Lord'}
13th January 2004:
Damn it I forgot to sign in GGGRR. Well anyway it was good add more to em potter on you other name...Bored like hell me and ant the sec are fightin how tirin i have to find something mean to say bye!!!
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{reviewid: 92965, reviewer: 'the%20writers'}
8th January 2004:
WE LOVE IT! i mean it is great...i cant be that shallow....its not that good but once again rubber ducks are wrting it and they dont have much brains...(lol morg)
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{reviewid: 90927, reviewer: 'gina'}
1st January 2004:
hey! great story so far! i really like the characters... keep it up! update soon!
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{reviewid: 88848, reviewer: 'Dark%20Lord'}
25th December 2003:
It was good..... I like it so far. But I like the sarcasim used it reminds me of my friends. Oh yeah and you and your Rubber Duck friend that is like my friend but we have been obsest (spelt wrong) with ant eaters dont ask it is a long story.
I had to add this at the end and anyone who thinks other wise is wrong.......................................................
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..............* Orlando Bloom = Hot *
Author's Response: yes...orlando bloom is very hot...i have a shrine in my room... : )
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{reviewid: 88789, reviewer: 'Lil%20Evans'}
25th December 2003:
Omg first to coment
Two words
Love it
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{reviewid: 88777, reviewer: 'Lil%20Evans'}
25th December 2003:
uh peater is a pure blood thus the reason he is a seporter of lord moldie mort or he would be dead i wish the little bastard was
Author's Response: oops well its a fan fic
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{reviewid: 84662, reviewer: 'baby_gurl'}
8th December 2003:
Can't wait to see what happens next!!!!!
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{reviewid: 80899, reviewer: 'kt'}
23rd November 2003:
Reda your story. you want people to comment- so here it goes. no offence but you story could be so much better. you need to put in the time to say what's going on not just the conversation. it's a great plot and everything but isn't james surpposed to be in first year? all they talk about is who they want to go out with- sorry but you need something else to make people interested. sorry again if this seems harsh but... i think it's a work in progress
Author's Response: thnks! i think were going to rewrite it under other name one day...i no its a little odd
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{reviewid: 80713, reviewer: 'Cariel'}
22nd November 2003:
Your keenly crafted, witty banter makes for snappy dialogue that delightfully entertains the reader. This is the first Marauder fic I've enjoyed! Loved the disclaimer at the end of chap 12 too btw~!
Author's Response: we feel so special
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{reviewid: 79231, reviewer: 'Rubber%20Duck%20the%20second'}
15th November 2003:
Hey Rubber Duck the first we haven't written in a while. I don't care if you where in Disney thanks for the suvoners though!!!! We have to write more right now u are at your dads house: ( Call me when you see this ok cya
Author's Response: calling u now
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{reviewid: 76130, reviewer: 'pla303'}
29th October 2003:
this story is SO FUNNY i luv it and the excesive use of bad words
Author's Response: thanks
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{reviewid: 75646, reviewer: 'baby_gurl'}
26th October 2003:
Must we punish Remus so?!?!?!
Author's Response: not punishing...it was needed....she had to know...eventually
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{reviewid: 75522, reviewer: 'Cariel'}
26th October 2003:
That was so cute~ this is NOT HAPPENING IN MY ROOM hehe...
Author's Response: thanks
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{reviewid: 75271, reviewer: 'star'}
24th October 2003:
First off, gotta say, LOVE WHAT YOU DID to PETER!! Man, his is such a.. well you know! Well, please continue the story. Thankz!
Author's Response: thanks...we all hate him...unless there stupid and they have brain issues...
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{reviewid: 75267, reviewer: 'star'}
24th October 2003:
Nice touch adding "Hermoine" (Emma Watson) Well, anyway, great story! please continue!
Author's Response: we(me and rubber duck the 2) didn't even realize we did that...thats the last name of a boy in are school and we were talking about him. Now, we are going in Rubert Grint and Daniel Radcliffe... : )
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{reviewid: 75251, reviewer: 'nightwerewolf11'}
24th October 2003:
GREAT!you should really write more!
Author's Response: doing that
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{reviewid: 75248, reviewer: 'Morgan%20aka%20Rubber%20Duck%20%28the%20second%29'}
| Review #22, by Morgan aka Rubber Duck (the second) | The Howler |
24th October 2003:
It sucked!!!!
OOOO!!!!!!!! Wait sorry i helped u write the story. It was great Rubber Duck( the first)And i forget u have to add something about "SQUIRREL HATS" !!!!!!!
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{reviewid: 75247, reviewer: 'Morgan%20aka%20Rubber%20Duck%20%28the%20second%29'}
| Review #23, by Morgan aka Rubber Duck (the second) | The Howler |
24th October 2003:
It sucked!!!!
OOOO!!!!!!!! Wait sorry i helped u write the story. It was great Rubber Duck( the first)And i forget u have to add something about "SQUIRREL HATS" !!!!!!!
Author's Response: ah...the squirrel hat...I LOVE U RUBBER DUCK! (the 2)
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{reviewid: 75233, reviewer: 'baby_gurl'}
24th October 2003:
Well!? We're all waiting for the next WONDERFUL chapter! So get crackin'!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: YES! THEY LIKE US!! THEY REALLY LIKE US!! THEY EVEN THINK ITS WONDERFUL!
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{reviewid: 75166, reviewer: 'toomanycurls'}
24th October 2003:
good chapter. I'd put some lines in between a person's lines and the next, it gets hard to read.
Author's Response: yeah we did...
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