Reading Reviews for The Moon's Encounter
  
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Review #1, by Quidditchandhorses The Accident

5th June 2008:
Well, it's not bad, it has a good storyline, but you may want to make a little more... flowy. I can't think of a different word, but it sort of just jumps from section to section right now. Like I said, it's really not bad (I quite like it!), it just has a few revisions that could be made. Keep up the good work!

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Review #2, by Starry Night The Accident

15th March 2006:
hey, i love your story, please update soon!!!

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