OMG!!! That was sooo good! You didn't make any spelling or grammar mistakes! Alot of authors on this website do not even know how to spell some of the characters' names! The plot was really good and the sweet! Keep up the good work! Report Review
I...am in shock.
I've never been a fan for Hermione/Draco fanfictions, but you are the best writer I think I have ever had the pleasure of reading. This story is amazing and I think I might actually read some Hermione/Draco stories now. Report Review
That was ... Perfect!
I bow to you! Well done. Report Review
that. was. so.
BEAUTIFUL! it could have made me cry. it was so perfect. each and every word was placed delicately into where it should have been and if not, the story wouldn't have sounded the same. i really really liked this story! Report Review
holy jeasly crow. I'm deffinitly adding you to my favorite author's list. And you can have cookies. I forgive you for killing Draco. Don't you feel loved? Report Review
It was a great story... but too much of the imagining part.... the one you repeated twice... thats why its a bit long... but it was really nice!!! : ) Report Review
i loved it, i would add it to my favorites list but i could'nt find the link. Report Review
I liked it, it was very well written and had a good plot-thing (You can't really say it had a proper plot!). Seeya! Report Review
OMG REALLY GOOD STORY so much detail and idk somehow it was sothingAuthor's Response: ah yes soothing, I'm surprised and glad people feel that. thanks for reviewing, I appreciate it. Report Review
Superbly realised. :) I love that song, 'Pure Shores'. You put it to good use ... I loved the lyrics throughout the story. Great job.Author's Response: hmm well, there was a time when I was a lot fonder of the song but I still thought it fit perfect ... ergo, I used it. glad you liked it, thanks for the kind words. Report Review
That was so beautiful, so serene... I loved it. Funny, I actually feel rather relaxed after reading that...Author's Response: hehe. goody you felt relaxed, exactly what I felt when writing it. thanks for the review, I appreciate the nice words :) Report Review
oh my freaking god!! The story was soo deep, i was practically imagining myself instead of Hermioen!! GREAT JOB!!!!!!!Author's Response: that is so what I want to achieve, that you can totally feel what is going on. I was a little worried about the whole story, but thanks for the nice comment, made me smile. Report Review
Awesome! I love your use of imagery. Your story combines good dialogue and awesome description all into one without an excessive of one or the other.Author's Response: I am so glad to hear (or rather read) that, I was so worried about the whole description thing and if it worked well or not, cause I wanted you guys to read and totally feel the atmosphere, see it in front of you. so, glad that worked.thanks so much for the nice words, I appreciate them tons. Report Review
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