its a good start. keep going with it. but watch your spelling and grammar and such.. but definately keep going with it.. i enjoyed it. Report Review
hey kay u pain in the beep. lol jk. the first part was good but u need to hurry your ass up and add more so i can read it. and if malfoy isnt hot i will kick ur beeeeeepppp.lol n e ways. moving on. it was good but stop reading the comments as i write it!! dum bass! lol jk. oh and dusty is sexy and eric is gonna be ur friend and so is dusty. p.s. ur not sorry Report Review
Hi yes it was a very good story i really liked it and would like to find out what happens yet again there are many typos and maybe since the 5th book is out you should change it to the 6th year perhaps? um this has gotten me into the mood of joining myself and writing my own stories i just hope i have the time i would give this 3 stars so far!
hey its okay i didnt really get that last chpater but oh welll and there are abouit 838757387 typos in it well ill stop giving you a HARD time and get to giving some others HARDER times lol you should really read the story im reading cant remember what its called though lol hey katie whats up!^^^^
xoxoxoxoxo-Jeni Report Review
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