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Reading Reviews for Paths we walk
  
3 Reviews Found

Review #1, by malynnda_malfoy (not logged in) Prophecy and The begining

14th December 2005:
See, its much better now! I love it by the way, its very different from most stories!!

Author's Response: Thanks Malynnda cant wait for the time to type the next addition maybe friday :D

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Review #2, by Tessa *malynnda_malfoy* Prophecy and The begining

11th December 2005:
Hey, I can help you edit this if you want me to. Just email me tessanoodles@yahoo.com and I'll help you out the best I can!! Good job with the story!!

Author's Response: Thanks i'll do that

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Review #3, by chris Prophecy and The begining

10th December 2005:
“I” is always a capital! So is the first letter of people's names! Adults barely ever call kids or teens ‘Ms.’ – and the Dursley’s hate magical people therefore it’s out of character for him to call her “Ms. Knight”. There is nothing more annoying in fan fic then someone not bothering to use spell check! Sorry to be so disparaging but your mistakes drove me mad all the way through. It was a promising piece of writing however and I can see you’ve got plenty of potential. Work on your spelling, grammar, and punctuation.

Author's Response: Thank you and I thank you for telling me all this I Really appreciate that I'll Edit it the best i can and about mr.Dursley he had no idea what else to call her sorry might have to change that Again i thank you for your help and i hope you keep reading as i put it up. ~Lunarmagica

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