Oh, how sad! Very sweet, but so sad! I knew that she couldn't have actually come back from the dead, but I'm glad that at least she died knowing the truth.
I really liked the poem. It was very well written, and even without the little additions, it made perfect sense.
Great job!

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oh no...for some time you made me thank you for still keeping her alive...but you kiled her ! ! ! ! ! neverthless good story

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Okay, well i'm gonna pretend she just passed out, and when she wakes up the war'll be over, and rainbows, and butterflys will cover the skies, and bunnys will play happily amidst the flowers, while unicorns and multicolored ponys frolic around them.

Okay, so maybe that's a little much, how bout she wakes up and he's there waiting axiously for her? I think I like that one better actually.

It was an excelent oneshot, you are an extremly talented writer!! totalt a 10/10!!! ^.^
kisses
~*jenni*~

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great stories you have here...:D loved this one too

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That was really beautiful. The poem was well written too. I just wasn't sure ... did she die in the end?

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wow that was good i loved the poem

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Wonderful story, brilliant poem, great job!-iimw

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omg this is so freaking great! honestly dude uve got some mad skills! i almost cried when reading it!

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OH MY GOD,
YOU ARE SO GOOD

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wonderful one shot!

the poetry was amazing totally brilliant!

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??? I Don't Know What 2 Say? I love the poem that you put.While i was reading it,.the words that you put in are deep,it touch my heart.*sigh*...You know,if you added more romance with drama,you're going to make me Bawl like a baby.It's really so heartbreaking and a relief in the end,cuz i took your suggestion dat i pretend she passed out.Really Touchy,Luv it!

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haha if yu like yu can pretend she just passed out! Lmaooo aww thats so funny. I thought it was sad then i read that and i cnt stop laughing...hang on.
right ok, very good, i really really liked it! it would be cool if yu like did a stopy to explain how they were together and stuff like that buh i spose if yu dnt it leaves our imaginations 2 it =D
Alex xx

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I cried...which means I liked it..alot! Is there going to be another chapter? I would really like it. Please tell me!

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I loved your story. One of the best I have read.

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this was great!
i normally dont like draco and hermione pairings, but this was was great!
Great plot and great twist!
loved it!
brona


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argh! u cant just leave it there! it was beautifully written and i love the poem bits in there that just tied the whole thing together. well done. but with the end i dont think it really finished the story but hey thats just me but i really liked it

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Good story, I really liked it. I think it's a better ending if she did actually die though...mor dramatic, you know? More heart riveting. So to me she died.
But you did a really good job
:)

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aaaw that is so sad, but really really good :)

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You ar a very talented writer, and I LOVE IT!

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Your story was fantastic!!!
It made me cry. A story has never done that to me before. Literally.
And from reading your reveiws it shows that i'm not the only one.
Your really talented if you can get a emotion out of someone from a short story & it also helps when you are writing about something you love. Harry Potter!
It was a fablous read & i can't wait to read more!


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yeah she just passed out lol too sad to die, but it was a great story

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i my god i am like so crying right now!!!!!!!!!!!!!!i love all ur stories matty!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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hahaha see i told you i read your stories!! thats right you know who i am!! i lover this one its awesum!! bahaha did u really write that poem thingy coz its radical i must say mmm yes damn u can only give it 10 as a rating i give it 10,000

Author's Response: Did you cry?! *Evil genuis kinda grin* Yes, I did write the poem it came before the story!!! Yay 10, 000 thats almost how many petitions we've done!

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wait...
so she died?
i love when people die in stories!
it was like.
tragic!
ah!.
but written like goodly.
not a word, i know, but thats how i shall describe it.
well.
anywho. i'll read more of your stories now.

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I LOVE IT SO MUCH! :) :) :) U get a 9/10, i never people 10's b/c I think we all can improve even in little ways, but you are like a 91/2 out of 10

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