It's really good and flows really well. There are a few commars missing, but it is in other ways perfection. Well done.Author's Response: Wow, big thanks :) I'm glad you liked it! sorry for the missing comas. Report Review
awwwwww please write a squeal.Author's Response: I guess you meant a sequel, Sorry but even if I wanted to I wouldn't know what to write about, I'm glad you like the story though! Report Review
You suck. It doesn't draw you in at all, and it kinda skips and jumps. Go into things; a good reason to become friends, why they love eachother, instances of seeing eachother in a new light. If you're going to do the impossible, do it right.Author's Response: Hey sorry, this was my first fic, i was eleven when i wrote it! Report Review
Uh HMMMMMMM............................Author's Response: What?! Report Review
ah its so sweet i love itAuthor's Response: Thanks! Report Review
awwww how romanticAuthor's Response: Thanks
good - above average.
the "the end" has to go
At least it makes senseAuthor's Response: I guess so. Report Review
That's cute. Who was the song by, though? You should credit them. Author's Response: Thanks, the song is by sarah Connor and i wrote that in the summary, you should pay attention.
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