hahah, it's cute. it's a new twist on the whole thing. and i see that you think that Harry's a horcrux. I don't know what i believe, but I definitely had the idea that something to do with him, whether it was him, or his scar, or something like that, was a horcrux. it makes sense, doesn't it?
good writing, keep it up!
SudhaAuthor's Response: Yeah, I think there's a large possibility that he or something about him is a horcrux. Thanks for reading and big thanks for the comment! I'm glad you liked it! Report Review
A pretty good piece of fiction, I liked the ideas you have about what happens after the 6th book. Very clever.
I would have loved this to have been a longer piece, but you have done a good job here!Author's Response: Aw, thanks! I wanted to do something a little different. I'm glad you liked it! Report Review
WOW i was reluctant to read this story because i only read romance fics and this one was under general but i really enjoyed it. It was pretty good.Author's Response: Thank you! I'm very glad you enjoyed reading it! Report Review
brillant x 100
u r really a great writer i can't wait to read another of your stories.
Author's Response: Thank you sooo so much!! I'm glad you liked the story! Report Review
Wow. Story is good. Keep on writing!Author's Response: Thank you! I'm not sure if this will have a sequel or not. Report Review
By the way, I Love ur banner!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Did you make it?? It rox!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!Author's Response: Lol yes I did. And thank you! Report Review
This is a great story!! So well written. Yeah its long but i still enjoyed it.Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you liked it!! Report Review
I definitely love that story!Author's Response: Woo! Lol. Thanks! Report Review
Wow! That was brilliant! Couldn't you continue the story - it is so excellent! Your writing style is amazing, the story line and pace - just perfest, the characterisation - great - what more can i say? I loved it immensly!!Author's Response: Thank you soooo much! I'm very glad that you liked this story. I could possibly continue the story...I actually am thinking that I might. Report Review
Absolutely wonderful. Indescribably excellent.Author's Response: Wow, really!? Thank you very, very much! That means so much to me!! Report Review
Hey, If you think you should have done more to it, you could edit it and put in a new ending, or do a sequal... or part ll or whatever...lol... I still think ur storie's great... and i think i spelt story's wrong... oh well... lol...Author's Response: Haha, well thanks. And there's no apostrophes in plurals. But yeah...oh well. You always progress as you write, so the next story I finish I'll be sure to make it an ending that I like. Report Review
God!! I'm in LOVE with the banner!!! lol... the story ROCKED... it was such a great plot... i got cold chills when they were explaining everything to Ron... 'specially about George's twin dying... that was sooooo sad!!!Author's Response: ^-^ Thank you! I'm glad you liked it!!! I'm really not that proud of the ending, though. I feel as though I should have spent more time on it. Report Review
I liked this story a lot. Unique plot. However, I hoped you would have spent a bit more about Ron's life after the renewal of his memory. The stuff with Sylvia in the beginning was done nicely, but then it just dissapears. It would have been nice to see Hermione try and explain it all to Sylvia. But still, nicely done!Author's Response: Thank you! Yeah...I keep reading it over and over and every time I think to myself, 'I should have spent more time on the ending.' Anyways, I greatly appreciate the comment and suggestion. Thank you very much!! Report Review
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