oh wow, I absolutely LOVE this fanfiction!!! Report Review
good story so far, a bit tedious at times, but nevertheless good Author's Response: Yeah, I do tend to stray away sometimes...I'll try and work on that a bit...thanks! ;0 ~*~Jessica~*~ Report Review
i think i spelled that wrong. it was kinda hard to read becasue all of the talking was put into one paragraph. Report Review
i think i spelled that wrong. it was kinda hard to read becasue all of the talking was put into one paragraph.Author's Response: Yes, I tried to fix that...it never really occurred to me until somebody pointed out I should fix how I set up my paragraphs...hopefully I'm doing better! Report Review
Oh dear. Trouble, Trouble, Trouble =] Aundrea reminds me of myself XDD Author's Response: Well, that's good that you can relate to my character! ;) Like they posted a bit below this, Aundrea was a Mary-Sue, and I've hopefully fixed that with the 'wanting to please everyone, and is really emotional' problem...and there's also a problem with Hermione and Ginny that Aundrea needs to work on... Report Review
I will make your banner. I'll have it finished tonight. Email me when you get this message. My Email: samanthahardy25@hotmail.com Report Review
it's draco isn't it? she's having breakfast with Draco right? and Hermione and Ginny are jealous of her for flirting with the guys that they like. hat's what i think. I love this fanfic!!!Author's Response: Crap! My readers are too smart for me! LOL! I'm glad to see you're into the story though, thanks! ~*~Jessica~*~ Report Review
wats she gonna do?? Report Review
hey that's really good. Report Review
okay, heres my advise, take it or leave it ;) a little prob with ur formatting, try to not make it so cluttered, so itll be easier to read and make sure ur characters, um, 'mortal', a mary sue is someone whose perfect and no one likes a mary sue. try to add some flaws, it creates a better character. ;) its good, tho, especially for a first story. Author's Response: Thank you for that. I needed some realness! I will try to add more flaws to her, and reading back on it, she needs it. Thanks again! ~*~Jessica~*~ Report Review
i love it. ;) Report Review
i love it so far i want to keep redin plz updateAuthor's Response: Yay! My first review! :D Thank you, SO SO much! I will update, JUST FOR YOU tonight. But, I have to get to my own private computer first. But, I'm going to put a thank you up for my first reviewer, Tara. Thank you! ~*~Jessica~*~Author's Response: Man! Scratch that. My stupid little brother is up with me (and it's midnight, damnit!), and since I'm really really shy, I won't be able to write in front of him, so maybe I'll update tomorrow. I know where I'm going with this WHOLE story, and it won't be too long...so don't worry about me taking "thinking time" up to post. If I don't it's because I can't get alone to do it! Sorry for the wait, ~*~Jessica~*~ Report Review
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