Good job for the first chapter (despite whatever the oh-so-pleasant "bob" had to say). You're a good writer with a lot of talent- keep going! One small tip, though: you might want to leave a line in between each paragraph because it makes it easier to read for people to read. Besides for that, it was wonderful! I will be looking forward to the next chapters!!!

 Report Review

Hi again! I can't believe Bob was so rude in that review! Is he a psycho or just downright unaware that anyone out there has feelings! It was totally uncalled for! Well, keep going for my sake at least, 'cos I like it!

 Report Review

This is REALLY good. Sorry I've been on holiday and haven't got back to reading this for a while, but it's really good! It's great that you've made the plot very ralistic and excatly as I would see book seven starting out. Well done! - Rachael.

Author's Response: once again, thanks - thats a bit more positive than bob's feedback!!!! lol :P

 Report Review

what a load of utter rubbish! im glad you havent finished the whole book yet you idiot!

Author's Response: sorry you don't like it, Bob but it would be more constructive if you cut back on the name-calling and actually said what makes it "rubbish"

 Report Review

This is a really good piece of work with a good storyline that ties in well with HBP. I really like where this is going it's a really good story and if you were JK Rowling submitting this as part of book seven, I'd certainly pre-order my copy!

Author's Response: wow-thanks! sorry chapter 2 was such a long time coming, but it's submitted as of today.

 Report Review