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Review #1, by Princess Elle Malfoy Chapter Two: Common Sense

6th August 2006:
I am disgusted with you. Draaco is the most charming guy and Ron is just a cheap poor scumbag. Stick with poor baby Draco.

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Review #2, by DracoSexy Chapter One: Questions Of Concern

3rd February 2006:
Nice but may I recommend that you explain emmotions a bit better, not to be rude but there is alot of diolouge *if thats how you spell it* and it is harder to read the story if it is like that, But I also don't know if this is your style of wrighting. Whitch everyone has a different idea on how to write! ~Amanduh~

Author's Response: Thanks for the review, i appreciate it! Yeah, my story is a little weird...the large amount of dialogue is because that's how i write and as for the whole emotions issue, i thought they were somewhat obvious - but maybe i was wrong. Anyway, the emotions of the charcters are quite complex, and even now as i continue to write this story, find the characters odd and sometimes un-understandable - but i like that mystery about them, and if you read on, you get a (sort of) better understanding of how the characters feel. I'm sorry if you find it hard to read the dialogue, i'll try to improve my dialogue in the future, and make it easier to read. Thanks again, for taking the time to read my story! Glo

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Review #3, by Paloma Patil Chapter Two: Common Sense

1st February 2006:
Well - she certainly has her work cut out for her if she's going to turn Draco into a decent fellow! Great work so far...Paloma

Author's Response: Paloma, you're the best! Thanks for the review, it gets me excited to find out i have one. Thanks for the support...Glo

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Review #4, by Paloma Patil Chapter One: Questions Of Concern

17th January 2006:
Oh - great exposition! Can't wait for the next chapter - well done! Paloma

Author's Response: Thanks! The next chapter should be up very soon, i hope you like it...

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