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Review #1, by Drunk Elves Workout, and Flashback

1st June 2006:
wow... this is a pretty awesome story! Keep it up, but don't forget about paragraphs.. :D

Author's Response: Thanks a lot. It needs a bit of editing, and I'll probably rework the whole chapter and begging of the plot before going on. Right now I'm trying to get my other story off the ground, but I promise I will come back to it. And yeah, sorry about the paragraphs thing. When I put it up forever ago the copy paste interface didn't work. Thanks a lot for reading. ~ Ran

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