I'm sorry to be so harsh but the grammar in this story is terrible. I think it is a wonderful idea for a story though it is a little heavy on dialouge and not very descriptive. i also think that it moves a bit too fast. Report Review
this story has me intereted but, it's moving a bit fast for me. I like it a lot but can you slow down alittle please?? (I do way worse when Im writing I like skip 30 years lol) Report Review
wow!!! nice start RupertLover9069 its really good. got me ineterested. when's the next chapter coming up? update soon please!!! i'll keep a regular review in your later chapters!!! xoxoxoxoxAuthor's Response: i put 3 more chapters in I'm waiting for them to be validated. Thanx so much for the review and I'll try and keep the chapters coming in fast Report Review
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