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Review #1, by dancer_chick546 New Sister

15th July 2007:
I'm sorry to be so harsh but the grammar in this story is terrible. I think it is a wonderful idea for a story though it is a little heavy on dialouge and not very descriptive. i also think that it moves a bit too fast.

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Review #2, by DyingForDraco Before the full moon

9th December 2005:
this story has me intereted but, it's moving a bit fast for me. I like it a lot but can you slow down alittle please?? (I do way worse when Im writing I like skip 30 years lol)

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Review #3, by lady_devil New Sister

4th December 2005:
wow!!! nice start RupertLover9069 its really good. got me ineterested. when's the next chapter coming up? update soon please!!! i'll keep a regular review in your later chapters!!! xoxoxoxox

Author's Response: i put 3 more chapters in I'm waiting for them to be validated. Thanx so much for the review and I'll try and keep the chapters coming in fast

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