{reviewid: 2080959, reviewer: 'thegeneralofmusic%40yahoo.ca'}
23rd March 2009:
Good story but, yes pretty short. You did well for your first.
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{reviewid: 2080957, reviewer: 'thegeneralofmusic%40yahoo.ca'}
23rd March 2009:
Well, I am glad that worked out o.k.
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{reviewid: 2080954, reviewer: 'thegeneralofmusic%40yahoo.ca'}
23rd March 2009:
Hermione having a sister. Pretty cool!
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{reviewid: 2080952, reviewer: 'thegeneralofmusic%40yahoo.ca'}
| Review #4, by thegeneralofmusic@yahoo.ca | Chapter 1 |
23rd March 2009:
I wonder why the owl took two weeks to come back. Now he can leave this place for good.
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{reviewid: 1906911, reviewer: '...'}
26th April 2008:
*privet not private but its good toher then that
Author's Response: Thanks!
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{reviewid: 1905905, reviewer: '%2F%3E%2C'}
25th April 2008:
umm your story is good so far but its like you jump from thing to thing
Author's Response: I did. First story ever, so it's rather bad. *shudders*
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{reviewid: 1707314, reviewer: 'Weasley_Wizard_Wheezes'}
11th November 2007:
interesting start! read/review my story please!!!
Author's Response: Thanks! But sorry, I probably won't read your story. ^_^
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{reviewid: 1526372, reviewer: 'searching17'}
20th July 2007:
i love this story already!
Author's Response: Thank you!
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{reviewid: 1524123, reviewer: 'firewitch'}
19th July 2007:
I have read the whole story and like you said I did think it was a little faced pace. But for your first story it was a well thought out and it is a good summer with the trio story. I am looking forward to reading the sequel.
Author's Response: Thank you! I don't mean to sound stuck up, but the second one is much better.
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{reviewid: 1498993, reviewer: 'juliazerbe'}
6th July 2007:
i liked the plot and the idea, but it deffinately needs to develop slower, especially when he told her he loved her, it seemed fake. but keep trying!
Author's Response: Oh, I know. It was my first story, and I shudder to even think about it. But I promise you the sequels are much, much better!
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{reviewid: 1478611, reviewer: 'Consirius'}
24th June 2007:
Nice...I'm going to read the sequel soon.
Author's Response: Thanks!
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{reviewid: 1475777, reviewer: 'shadowkitty22'}
22nd June 2007:
So yeah, somehow I don't think that Mexican food in England would be that good or authentic. =^_^= But it's a cute little story.
Author's Response: Probably not. but my 11 year old self didn't know that, and I fear that if I try to edit it any more, I will delete it. Which will be a problem seeing as how I like the sequels. Thanks for the review!
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{reviewid: 1448562, reviewer: 'jenny8'}
5th June 2007:
awww a very sweet story!
8
luv, ~jenny
x x
Author's Response: Thank you! It was my worst though. I can barely look at it without shuddering.
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{reviewid: 1402674, reviewer: 'liandhate'}
1st May 2007:
It's a good story, I just think it moves a little bit too fast.
9/10
cheers
li
Author's Response: I know it moves too fast. It was my first story ever, written about 2 years ago. I just evened it out a bit so that it wasn't under 500 words. Thanks for the review!
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{reviewid: 1401752, reviewer: 'Bright%20Green%20Eyes'}
30th April 2007:
This was cute nice and sweet!
Author's Response: Thank you!
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{reviewid: 1400545, reviewer: 'jabberwocky09'}
29th April 2007:
I loved it! Please write more soon!
Author's Response: Thank you! There is a sequel up you know. It's called Happily Ever After?
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{reviewid: 1396700, reviewer: 'charmed%204eva'}
27th April 2007:
great
Author's Response: Thanks!
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{reviewid: 1382643, reviewer: 'Blondejoke101'}
17th April 2007:
This story was great!! I can't wait to read the sequel!
Author's Response: Thank you! The sequel is much better. I don't really like this story, but then again, it was my first.
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{reviewid: 1382637, reviewer: 'Blondejoke101'}
17th April 2007:
Wow, what will you think of next?
Author's Response: Haha, you'll see.
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{reviewid: 1382633, reviewer: 'Blondejoke101'}
17th April 2007:
Exciting!! I can't wait to read more!
Author's Response: Thanks
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{reviewid: 1382614, reviewer: 'Blondejoke101'}
17th April 2007:
I loved it!
Author's Response: Thank you! ^_^
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{reviewid: 1323758, reviewer: 'miss%20regulus%20black'}
27th February 2007:
wow already thinking of marrige? i mean they just got 2gether oh well love is love
10/10
kuddos for finishing the story by the way it was awsome!
Author's Response: Hehe, I know. But it was necessary for the plot of the sequel. Which is, personally, my favorite story I've written. Well, maybe it's tied with Speak.
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{reviewid: 1323754, reviewer: 'miss%20regulus%20black'}
27th February 2007:
ya they finally kissed lol and he told her yaaa for the gryffindor courage.
10/10
Author's Response: Yeah! Way too fast. Someday I really am going to redo this story. Maybe when I finish some of my other stories.
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{reviewid: 1323703, reviewer: 'miss%20regulus%20black'}
27th February 2007:
oh no! whats he gonna do? :)
10/10
Author's Response: Hehe. I don't really remember actually. it's been so long. Like 2 years, but some reason a couple months ago it moved up. Maybe because I changed the banner? Whatever. This is my least favorite story I've done, but thanks for the review and the kind words! ^_^
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{reviewid: 1323698, reviewer: 'miss%20regulus%20black'}
27th February 2007:
nice
10/10
Author's Response: Thanks.
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