Reading Reviews for The Bite (Remus Lupin)
11 Reviews Found

Review #1, by diamond_phoenix Bite

2nd April 2007:
green streaks?

Author's Response: yep

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Review #2, by MoonlitTwilight Bite

1st March 2007:
Wow...awesome writing. That really touched me. I cried a little. I feel for Remus so much. You should make this oneshot into a novel or novella. It would be really good.


Author's Response: I was thinking about that...but I'm writing three stories right now and I'm not home often...-_-

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Review #3, by lupa_mannera Bite

18th February 2007:
Okay this is a very nice start...exciting story...painful story (that's okay, that's my bag too!) I can't wait to read more. You have a typo in "maybe SHE'LL forgive you". (Sorry! I know it takes forever to edit) Very well done otherwise, and keep it going. You've got some great story ideas here, and themes to build on (friendship, forgiveness, redemption, love??) that you should be very proud of!

Author's Response: I did? Dang it. Ah well, I will fix it later...thanks for the review ^-^

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Review #4, by secret_witch Bite

15th February 2007:
You're good with these sad stories aren't you. 10/10

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Review #5, by silver phoenix Bite

14th July 2006:
*sniffles* Oh that's so sad! A bit short, but to the point. I wanted to cuddle Remus so badly. This could've been longer, but it's great as is. A few punctuation errors (can't help myself... *signs self up for "Anal About Spelling And Grammar Support Group"*) but I still loved it. Poor Jen! Poor Remus! Now I really want to know what happened that night. Er...we know she got bit but maybe you could've added a flashback after the line "She was just about everything I liked about girls. Smart, nice, unique, a big mouth but not afraid to state her opinion all in one." But it's your story, and it's just a suggestion. Ignore me. Adding to favorites! 10/10!

Author's Response: thanks for the suggestion...i might take improvising it to make it longer...if i ever feel like not being

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Review #6, by FirePearl Bite

16th June 2006:
Aww poor Remus :'( 10/10

Author's Response: oh yeah...thank you...*dramatic bow*

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Review #7, by argetlam shadeslayer Bite

1st June 2006:
Wow, that was pretty powerful. *nods wisely* I really like this fic - I mean, it's really different - in a good way, mind you - and it doesn't have a fairytale ending, which is kind of cool in a way, because you get a side of Remus that you never usually see. I like this one as it shows how much he regrets what happened, and how he realizes that this was his biggest mistake, and it kind of conveys a certain weakness of his. It might've been a tad longer, but I like it the way it is. Definitely going on my Favorites List. *adds on to Favorites List happily* Cheers!
-- Emma

Author's Response: you make me happy^^...glad you liked it so much!

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Review #8, by fmafan Bite

11th May 2006:
..WHAAAAAT!!! NO!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ...poor remus....

Author's Response: i mean...

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Review #9, by The girl who is alive Bite

5th March 2006:
Awww! Poor Remus!

Author's Response: i know...thanx for reviewing...

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Review #10, by Hermione528 Bite

4th December 2005:
Wow, that's even shorter than the first chapter of my fic! It's good, though!

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Review #11, by Hermione528 Bite

4th December 2005:
Wow, that's even shorter than the first chapter of my fic! It's good, though!

Author's Response: ya i know its short...Im glad you liked it though^-^

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