green streaks?Author's Response: yep Report Review
Wow...awesome writing. That really touched me. I cried a little. I feel for Remus so much. You should make this oneshot into a novel or novella. It would be really good.
~~~MOONY~~~Author's Response: I was thinking about that...but I'm writing three stories right now and I'm not home often...-_- Report Review
Okay this is a very nice start...exciting story...painful story (that's okay, that's my bag too!) I can't wait to read more. You have a typo in "maybe SHE'LL forgive you". (Sorry! I know it takes forever to edit) Very well done otherwise, and keep it going. You've got some great story ideas here, and themes to build on (friendship, forgiveness, redemption, love??) that you should be very proud of!Author's Response: I did? Dang it. Ah well, I will fix it later...thanks for the review ^-^ Report Review
You're good with these sad stories aren't you. 10/10 Report Review
*sniffles* Oh that's so sad! A bit short, but to the point. I wanted to cuddle Remus so badly. This could've been longer, but it's great as is. A few punctuation errors (can't help myself... *signs self up for "Anal About Spelling And Grammar Support Group"*) but I still loved it. Poor Jen! Poor Remus! Now I really want to know what happened that night. Er...we know she got bit but maybe you could've added a flashback after the line "She was just about everything I liked about girls. Smart, nice, unique, a big mouth but not afraid to state her opinion all in one." But it's your story, and it's just a suggestion. Ignore me. Adding to favorites! 10/10!Author's Response: thanks for the suggestion...i might take improvising it to make it longer...if i ever feel like not being lazy...lol Report Review
Aww poor Remus :'( 10/10Author's Response: oh yeah...thank you...*dramatic bow* Report Review
Wow, that was pretty powerful. *nods wisely* I really like this fic - I mean, it's really different - in a good way, mind you - and it doesn't have a fairytale ending, which is kind of cool in a way, because you get a side of Remus that you never usually see. I like this one as it shows how much he regrets what happened, and how he realizes that this was his biggest mistake, and it kind of conveys a certain weakness of his. It might've been a tad longer, but I like it the way it is. Definitely going on my Favorites List. *adds on to Favorites List happily* Cheers!
-- EmmaAuthor's Response: you make me happy^^...glad you liked it so much! Report Review
..WHAAAAAT!!! NO!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ...poor remus....Author's Response: i know...im mean... Report Review
Awww! Poor Remus!Author's Response: i know...thanx for reviewing... Report Review
Wow, that's even shorter than the first chapter of my fic! It's good, though! Report Review
Wow, that's even shorter than the first chapter of my fic! It's good, though! Author's Response: ya i know its short...Im glad you liked it though^-^ Report Review
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