Aww that was cute i loved it!

Author's Response: Thanks, ReAnna!! I loved writing it :)

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its so cute if u ever read this go back and update!!

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aww, very nice story. simple and sweet :D

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cute, thats the perfect word for it.

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aw! thats so cute!

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its amazing!

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that was so cute! loved it, with all the twists and turns, the usual 'Sirius is a dumbass' and 'Remus knows more about women', but i love the was you took that to the extreme, the way James was so stupid (typical), and the way he made up for it. the last line was truly beautiful. hope to read more soon. xXx

Author's Response: :-D Thanks! Wow... nice review! Hope to hear more from you in the future!

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aww thatwas weet. espaeailly the last sentence. wicked story
xxx
JimJams or Jodie

Author's Response: Thanks! Yeah... that last line was one I'd been wanting to use forever... but it just seemed to fit a James/Lily story-- and this was my first J/L fic :-D

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*smiles* very, very, very lovely. I love it! You've done a great job of capturing the idiocy of James' attempts at gaining Lily's affections and Lily's sharp replies. Two thumbs up!

Author's Response: Thanks!! Awesome u think so :-) I just thought that this would be how most boys would be tempted to try it... especially those kinds that think they know everything there is to know about girls... they know nothing!!

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that's was so cute! i liked how you played just the right amount of tension and unhappiness. good job!

Author's Response: LoL... great! I try not to overdo things but sometimes I just don't know how I really did until ppl tell me... thanks so much for the awesome review! :-) Hope to hear from you again for the next chpt... if i ever get around to getting it up :-p

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Hey this is good! I usually don't read Lily/James fics even though I love them because I don't want to find out they're bad. I like the best for Lily and James. =D

Author's Response: LoL... yeah... i dont really read Harry/Ginny fics for the same reason... and I don't typically dwell in Marauder fics at all-- I never read them so I was surprised that so many people liked the ones I've done... I'm a total noob at it

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That was a nice little story! I liked how short and to the point it was. However, I do think that the characters acted a little childish for the age they're supposed to be and there were a lot of cliche's in there that are in alot of the typical Lily/James Mary Sue's. But the Mary Sue's worked here so I'm not gonna complain lol. I really did like the fic!

~sugarhighz

Author's Response: LoL... thanks sugarhighz :-p I agree they did act a little childish... but where I'm from-- boys always act childish for their age lol... and a good amount of the girls... especially when they start getting towards the end of their school career.... *this being said as Graduation time approaches* lol

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Wow. You are great! What a way you have with your words--and ideas! A fantastic ending for a fantastic fic! You are wonderful!

Author's Response: *blushes* awww... shucks *giggle* really? wow... thanks! :-D :-D :-D that really made my morning to hear!! *huge grin* LoL.. if ur gonna leave reviews like that-- then PLEASE read my other stories too :-p I could handle more of these!

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aww that was sweet

Author's Response: lol yeah.. im made of mush.. dont tell anyone!

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wow that was unexpected

Author's Response: really? i always try to add one twist in my stories if not more.. does that count as one u think?

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not a good plan

Author's Response: lol yea.. thanks for reviewing!! :-D us writers looooov reviews... *grin*

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awesome,

Author's Response: thnx amber... glad u like it :p

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really cute story!

Author's Response: thanks!

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I LOVED this story! Even though I knew what the ending was going to be, I still though it was really tense. It was soooooo good!

Author's Response: Thanks Cohkka!! Glad to hear you liked it!! I never get reviews anymore.. so this made me feel good lol... byes!

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I love your story!Keep writting more stories.

Author's Response: Thanks Elena! Glad to hear that u like it! Keep reading my other stories... I should add a new chpt to my story "Bound By Silver" story

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Awwww...he got her! he got her! i love it!

Author's Response: LoL... thanks Zaphira! Yes.. he HAD to get her didn't he? *sigh* Ain't love beautiful? *bursts into tearas* (just kidding) But yeah... you should read Bound By Silver (another story of mine) if you haven't already... its good and sweet too....

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awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww that as really good!

Author's Response: LoL... yeah-- aint that sweet? :-)

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Oooo.... romantic! Love the way you write! ANd the dialouges are absolutely fantastic, so very very funny and well written!

Author's Response: Thank you so much Guns! I'm glad to see you back! Makes me smile to see old readers come back for new stories!

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that was an awesome fic. its better than most, because its not sooo fluffy that it makes u sick of the fic. heh, im a poet, wat can i say? anywho, this was a great pick me up story, seein as im sick an all. i hope u write others, but other types. you have a great style of writing and i would absolutely love to see things like draco/pansy's, but if thats not ur boat, thats cool.

Author's Response: lol draco is a good character to do romance with.. but ive never even considered writing a draco/pansy... i mean.. i really dont get a romancy thing out of that at all... but i guess the only people who know if those true are really in love is-- well-- those two. but i'll think about it... thanks for the review! first one in a while.. thought i'd hit a dry spell... or really, it was more like a drought...

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I love this entire story!! It's adorable, honestly. And the end is the perfect ending! Great Job!!

Author's Response: Thank you so much! Really, this is the first ACTUAL ending to any of my stories... the others had no real ending since there were sequels coming afterward (and the final is unfinished) and a song-fic that had no real ending... so yeah. This was my first ending... wow... I just noticed.... thanks again!

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