{reviewid: 2729831, reviewer: 'Luna'}
9th August 2012:
Can u at least correct ur spelling mistakes?? I found loads and then I couldn't understand what they were saying. :(
Apart from that it was good.
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{reviewid: 2636617, reviewer: 'You%20toooooo%20funny'}
| Review #2, by You toooooo funny | thoughs |
31st December 2011:
I meen serrooslee You hilaruis.
Just joking.
Don't ever write a story again, until you finally complete first grade successfully.
Bye.
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{reviewid: 2533044, reviewer: 'Mrs.%20Malfoy'}
12th June 2011:
Aahh i dont care..the important thing is i love your story! Have a really amazing imagination and write it. I want you to write next chapter.
I like your story bcz you don't have a disgusthing imagination. You knoww ;)
I'm waiting for you
Your Secret Admirer
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{reviewid: 2471425, reviewer: 'chickoftheblackroses'}
27th January 2011:
um well number one you have a lot of miss spellings in your story. second this is your story so you find out what you want to write.
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{reviewid: 2446197, reviewer: 'miss%20lily%20potter'}
6th December 2010:
hahahahahahah! dumbledore saying pigs and cows as a
password funy man LOL :-) u joka
10/0 this is so cool and funny!
ROFLMAO!
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{reviewid: 2281699, reviewer: 'Julia'}
9th January 2010:
this would be a lot better if it weren't for all of the spelling errors. You should consider looking over it.
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{reviewid: 2273113, reviewer: 'Jessie%20C.'}
24th December 2009:
Uhh... no offense but you're grammar and spelling errors are kind of annoying, but so far so good!
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{reviewid: 1995762, reviewer: 'itzy'}
26th November 2008:
well i like the story its good you should write more chapters .maybe you could write about draco and hermione getting locked in a broom closet or something but so far its a good story
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{reviewid: 1858332, reviewer: 'vixy'}
9th March 2008:
im sorry but you cannot spell to save your life im sorry if ive affended you but its true
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{reviewid: 1695627, reviewer: 'rowenaravenclaw94'}
3rd November 2007:
ok. well, good chapter...
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{reviewid: 1695626, reviewer: 'rowenaravenclaw94'}
3rd November 2007:
that was bold of draco...
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{reviewid: 1695624, reviewer: 'rowenaravenclaw94'}
3rd November 2007:
hermione and draco seem like they should be together. they are both so brilliant! i love them! good chapter! ew! harry kissed hermione! weird!
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{reviewid: 1695622, reviewer: 'rowenaravenclaw94'}
3rd November 2007:
that was so sick! i can't believe he did that! good job! best chapter so far!
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{reviewid: 1695620, reviewer: 'rowenaravenclaw94'}
3rd November 2007:
interesting...i love pansy! good chapter.
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{reviewid: 1695619, reviewer: 'rowenaravenclaw94'}
3rd November 2007:
good job! fyi, i believe that the correct spelling is ginny, not genny...
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{reviewid: 1587742, reviewer: 'Curiosity%20is%20not%20a%20sin'}
21st August 2007:
good but a LOT of spelling errors! Try getting a spell check system 'cos trust me that wud make it a lot easier! (Experience talking here!). And how come you've abandoned it???Grrr...
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{reviewid: 1552294, reviewer: 'lala'}
3rd August 2007:
your spelling is the most horrible thing i ever saw
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{reviewid: 1528974, reviewer: 'the_creator_questionmark'}
23rd July 2007:
spell and grammar check
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{reviewid: 1528965, reviewer: 'the_creator_questionmark'}
23rd July 2007:
its good, but you need spell bad or a beta
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{reviewid: 1483956, reviewer: 'L.K'}
27th June 2007:
THE NEXT CH: YOU CAN CALL IT TWO MINDS THE CH WELL BE ABOUT DRACO AND HERMIONE THINKING ABOUT THERE TOO KISSES AND ABOUT THERE NEW FEELINGS. AND DRACO TELLING HERMIONE HE KISSED HERMIONE 3 TIMES NOT TWO TIMES AND YOU CAN ADD MORE TO THE CH IF YOU WANT TO.
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{reviewid: 1390432, reviewer: 'hidden_angel'}
22nd April 2007:
cool, word of advice always check grammer, i do it too, lol, great chapter though
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{reviewid: 1376837, reviewer: 'Missiheartdraco2'}
13th April 2007:
Um, by Genny, do you mean GINNY?
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{reviewid: 1277366, reviewer: 'dark_lords_daughter'}
23rd January 2007:
dude. you have very bad grammer.
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{reviewid: 1244919, reviewer: '...'}
29th December 2006:
i agree,i believe youmight be a good author but... i cant understand it.
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{reviewid: 812691, reviewer: 'draco%20lva'}
15th December 2005:
i loved it, it was gr8 plz update
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