{reviewid: 924133, reviewer: 'Rachel'}
4th March 2006:
awww that was so cute!! i love it!! PLEASE write more chapters!
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{reviewid: 922643, reviewer: 'Sirius_Is_My_Homeboy'}
2nd March 2006:
Oh! I like this story alot. You're a really good writer. I can't wait to see more from you!
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{reviewid: 867366, reviewer: '-----------'}
21st January 2006:
i liked it but it wasnt one of muh favorites sory
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{reviewid: 865928, reviewer: 'Hermione_Roxs'}
19th January 2006:
Awwww. How cute
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{reviewid: 810379, reviewer: 'Cammy'}
13th December 2005:
ooo..finish it..what happens???....continue..please....it's a great story so far...
you are a great writer..
bye
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{reviewid: 798919, reviewer: 'Sudha53'}
5th December 2005:
I think the ending was a bit rushed, but you had a nice idea and structure for the story. But you really could have elaborated more on the last 5 or 6 paragraphs. I think Ron really wouldn't come right out and say everything on his mind. he would have started and maybe given her a hint, but it was just too "right out there" and same with hermione. But you really did have a cute idea. with some work, this could be a really excellent story!
-Sudha
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{reviewid: 789362, reviewer: 'unknown_force'}
29th November 2005:
The general part of the story's pretty good. It would have been easier to read though if each person's dialogue was a new paragraph.
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{reviewid: 788215, reviewer: 'gabzi27'}
28th November 2005:
CUTE MORE MORE MORE PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!~~~GABzi27~~~
Author's Response: I'm glad you like it ^^; I'm currently working on the next chapter.
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{reviewid: 787476, reviewer: 'Shii%20and%20Nel'}
28th November 2005:
inda short, but its pretty good. ^^
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. Don't worry, the next chapter will be much longer than the prologue.
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{reviewid: 787410, reviewer: 'Hermione%20Fan'}
28th November 2005:
Why is this in the one-shot section? It looks like the first chapter of a multi-chaptered fic? Other than that, it was oaky, kind of short. Try to add more.
Author's Response: Yeah, I'm new to the whole thing. I don't understand the one-shot/complete thing. And it's only short because it's the prologue. The next chapter is much longer ^^;
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