write moer please=] i'll love you forever

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and the relationship develops!!! YAY

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very very good! now i have to babble cuz i don't have 20 characters... gosh i hate that... very good!

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haha i love the marauders' letter

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Wow, the idea for your story is really interesting (barely anyone goes near the Hufflepuffs) and I love how you've developed the characters, especially Frank and Alice! When I realised who they were in the first chapter I nearly cried because their future is doomed... :'(

Keep writing, I'm intrigued about what will happen to them next! (I think I know who attacked Leo, but I shall keep my suspicions to myself ^_^)

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This is so good and so original

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ooh! thats a great beginning! ♥

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I love this story so much! Especially the romantic scenes with Remus :] :]
I like how you write in 2nd person its so unique

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amazing marauder letter!

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Well, I am enthralled, intrigued, and confused as ever! I love how it's written in the second person, and how you have the larger more complicated plot with the girls from different houses intertwined. Also, Leala is just so sweet. I can't help but wonder if she is going to be broken though. I sincerely hope not, but the world the Marauder's are living in is not a nice place. Knowing what happens to Lily, James, REmus and Sirius-I can't help but fear they are all in for a tragic downfall.
Please keep writing. Sequel here I come.

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I hate cliff hangers. Update soon. Awesome story!!

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I love this story!!!
It's so well written and i love the characters!
Please update soon!!
10/10

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Love LOve Love it


Author's Response: Thanks! : )

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love it! update soon!

Author's Response: Thank you very much! And believe me, I'm trying... very very very bad writers block...

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I love this story. I can't wait for more of it =)

Author's Response: :) Thanks! I'm working on the next chapter right now... so... check back!

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So very cute. I love it so far!

Author's Response: Yay! Thanks!

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.haha ha ahhaahahahah! That end note is so cute!! hahahaha! This is an adorable story, very creative. ;D


Author's Response: Thanks so much!!!

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I like it! I haven't read a you/character ship in a while great job!

Author's Response: :) Thanks!!

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Not bad, every chapter I read, the more I enjoy this story. It's original and entertaining. I love the main character, you can really relate to her. Thanks for the fic. Please update soon.

Author's Response: Wow, thanks! I will try to update soon... the promblem is that my laptop broke, along with my writting! So I'm having a hard time getting back... I'll try my best! : )

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oh my god. this has such a good plot, you better continue this! im addicted to it.

Author's Response: Thanks, and I will, don't worry! My laptop is broken, so for now I'm stuck until I can get it fixed...

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hehehe . . . do they know who the Marauders are yet? Or do they just suspect? I'm thinking that Leo knows, but the others just know subconciously sort of. I really liked the action here and Meg and Regulus are going to get together. *happy dance* Anyways, I loved this whole thing, especially how the Marauders secret identity is tied into it. I wonder what Leo needs, so urgently, to tell Leala. *ponders* Anyways, wonderful chapter. :D

Author's Response: Well, I can't tell you if anything you said was true! It would so give too much away! Anyway, I'm so glad you like it! *BIG* suprise comming up... oooo wonder what it could be? Haha, thanks again for the review!

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Great chapter, please update soon 10/10

Author's Response: Thanks : ) I'll try my best!

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Oh GOD! *cries* Update soon! Must...Find...Out...What...Happens...NEXT!

Author's Response: Haha, I'll try! Thanks for the review! In the mean time, go look at The Worst Kind Of Slytherin to tie you over untill the next update!

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another great chappie!

Author's Response: Yay! Thanks so much! : ) Now go check out The Worst Kind of Slytherin!!!

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Awww! I love Alice and Frank! I've never seen them in a fic before now! That's adorable, I love it! You write beautifully; I feel as if I'm in the story. You make me want to go back to writing fanfiction! I can't wait to read more!

Author's Response: ME TOO!!! Haha, thank you so so much... that is what 'you-fic' is all about... I'm glad you feel that way, b/c that was the point! Thanks again for the review, I'm so happy that you liked it!

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