I think It's okay.. I'll give it a 6... I think it's a nice topic--Luna--Malfoy, though Ron and Luna are a wierd match!Author's Response: This is actually based on a challenge, and Ron and Luna are to be the main couple. Report Review
UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! PLEASE DO AS THIS IS A BRILLIANT STORYAuthor's Response: Thank you very much for reviewing my story! Report Review
t.h.a.t..........w.a.s.......s.o.o.o.o.o.o.o.o..........s.w.e.e.t!!!! aw!!! carry on with the great work!!!! i never read stories like these......luna/ron....but ur soooo good!!!!Author's Response: Aww! Thanks so much! I am really glad you liked it that much! Report Review
omg its cute!! if u get a chance u should totally write more...tho i understnd COMPLETLY if you dont have timeAuthor's Response: Thank you Allie, if you have time feel free to check out my other stories until I start writing this one again. Megs Report Review
Day? Oh, that's not nice! I do hope that Luna keeps her *real* name, although the oxymoran is nice-- day/night, sun/moon! LOL. Oh I really want to see what happens. Is there any persuading you to continue? LunaAuthor's Response: She won't be keeping the name day... don't worry! I hate it too! There will be a little war about it. I can't continue yet, but hopefully can soon! Megs Report Review
Oh, Megs! I feel awful that I had to wait so long to read this, as I majourly enjoyed it. There was just the right blance of humour and romance! It's wonderful! LunaAuthor's Response: Thank you so much Luna! I'm glad you thought the balance was right and I see nothing about ooc and things like that! So thank you so much! Megs Report Review
You did good, even if in my opinion luna seemed a tad ooc. But she is hard to write. You dont' know how to mix the eccentricness and normality. At least, I have a hard time with it. Good job! -sarahAuthor's Response: Thank you for the review, Luna is so hard to write! Didn't think it would be so hard, thanks for the review anyway! Megs Report Review
Awwww, it was sweet. As much as I generally dislike the Ron/Luna ship, you made it believable. There were only a few typos. Overall, great job. -sarahAuthor's Response: Thank you very much, and I'm glad you enjoyed it! Megs Report Review
Luna is definatly the hardest character to write. She seemed a little ooc to me. The story was cool though. One mistake: MacGanagall......I beleive its McGonagallAuthor's Response: Ahh.... thank you for pointing out my mistakes, that's always great, I have a really hard time writing Luna, so the story will be wrapped up very quickly. Report Review
it was great I liked it...althought it could of been longer....cheesoAuthor's Response: Thank you and I'll try and make them longer! Report Review
Okay, this was interesting, but there were a few minor errors. All in all, waiting for the next chapter.Author's Response: Thank you very much, I appreciate the review, Megs Report Review
A few spelling mistakes.. Let me think now.. Slytherin was one for sure. And McGonagall was the other.. This was my first Luna fic. I just can't picture Ron loving Luna.. I just don't know. This fic was cute though.. Quirky like Luna =)Author's Response: Thank you, I really appreciate the review, this is based on a challenge, but thank you very much all the review! Report Review
aww...so sweet...it is great...Author's Response: Thanks Tarra! Report Review
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