that was so cute i loved the ending!!!!Author's Response: Thank you! Report Review
Cute... but is it going to be a one shot? I think you should do something else with this one... there are endless possiblities!Author's Response: Thank you... Report Review
Cute... but is it going to be a one shot? I think you should do something else with this one... there are endless possiblities!Author's Response: No, this is a one shot and I don't plan to expand on it at all... thanks for revieiwng though! Report Review
MAKE...IT...LONGER...IT...IS...KEWL...BUT...MAKE...IT...LONGER...AND...IT...WOULD...BE...EVEN...KEWLER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!Author's Response: Thanks so much for reviewing, I may do a sequel in the future! Report Review
cuteAuthor's Response: Thank you! Report Review
loveddd it!!!!!!!!!! ur a greaaat writer!!!Author's Response: Thank you very much, I appreciate it! Megz Report Review
it waas very cute.Author's Response: Thank you Meggie Report Review
It was a cute!! Personally, it touched me. The roles are kinda switched for my parents, and I can only hope that my parents situation can turn out like this one. It was really nice!Author's Response: Just so you know, they end up together and stay that way. I hope everything goes well with your parents! If it's like the story, it will end up good! Report Review
oh I loved it! It was soooo cute! and so sweet!!!Author's Response: Thank you very much, I'm glad you enjoyed it! Report Review
Great story.Author's Response: Thank you Life after Death! Report Review
Aww, That is so sweet!Author's Response: Thank you! Report Review
Aw! It's very cute! :)Author's Response: Thank you! Report Review
Oh, that was sweet. It has inspired me to write a one-shot, even though they aren't really my thing. Author's Response: I'm honoured that it has, and please if you do, I'd love to read it! Thank you for the review! Megs Report Review
Very cute and real life-like with the mistake made by Ginny. Which seems to be a common mishap.Author's Response: Thank you very much and I'm glad you liked it! Megs Report Review
Good story... I think a sequal about her future siblings would be nice, since Alice wants them and all.Author's Response: Thank you very much, unfortuneatly I'm too busy to take on anything else right now. Thank you fro the review though! Megs Report Review
I really liked it! Draco was a little ooc, a little too sweet, but it was still good. Alice was so cute, and the name really fits!! Good job, I really enjoyed it!Author's Response: Thank you somuch, you've given me so many wonderful reviews, I'm so happy and you've really made me smile today! Thank you! Megs Report Review
I loved it. Author's Response: Thank you! Report Review
what'll happen to Dean?? please contnue.. it NEEDS a continuation.Author's Response: Maybe... and thanks! Report Review
that is really sweet. sometimes i hate you oneshot fic writers because you come up with really good stories, and you just write one chapter. its like your trying to kill people like me! not that i hate you persay. (or however you spell the damn word). its just frustrating how good writers limit themselves. i think you should have a shot at writing a multi chaptered fic. i dunno if u already have. this is the first fic i've read from you. then again, if you dont have time, then dont worry about it. ill just cry myself to sleep. hahaha jk. i also think that you should try something like a draco/pansy. sorry if im piling on the guilt here. i dont mean to sound that way, but since i am an insensitive jerk (as some freshman in my latin class didnt waste time in telling me. he just has to be the class genius, insulting the class idiot. there really isnt anything else to me but good looks. hahah, again, i fool myself with sensless blabber) i think you should try to expand your ficwriting abilities. and you realy dont read many good draco/pansy fics. that or you dont read any that get completed (except the oneshots. damn you one shot fic writers!hahaha) if you ever need help. or a beta or anything....i dunno if ur a writing genius or something, but.......email me at: desdemonathedevil@yahoo.comAuthor's Response: Well, First of all thank you for the review, it's not insensitive it's wonderful and I'm glad you enjoyed it. I actually have some chaptered stories that you might be interested in if you are a Draco fan.... I will eamil you though and tell you some of this. I've never written Draco/Pansy... not really my thing. Anyway, thank you very much for the great review and I'll be in touch! Report Review
Wow... good job. Alice was adorable, a complete angel, but there were a couple things about her that irked me. I thought that when Draco and Ginny got together, perhaps Alice shouldn't have jumped and screamed as much in happiness. Yes, obviously she'd be happy, but it kind of detracted from the moment... from their moment. Other than that, she was a beautiful liittle girl. There were a few typos and errors scattered about... just watch yourself on that. Maybe try to put some more details and expressions on the characters... to give a better idea of what they're percieved as and what they feel like. Draco and Ginny both were slightly ooc, but you still wrote well. You did a really good job except for these mistakes, and please don't mistake it as me not liking it. It was very, very good, and I enjoyed it very much. Good job!Author's Response: Thank you very much, and this is a very great review, I know you like it, thanks for that. I will try and fix this up a bit, it was hard to write believe me... again! Thank you! Report Review
oh i loved this one-shot! that was sooo cute and the little girl....what a litlle angel and her name is alice, i love that firstname, well, maybe coz' it's mine too! (lol)Author's Response: I'm very glad that you enjoyed my story, and I too love that name! Report Review
Awww, it was cute! The only things that irked me a bit was the fact that when Draco said "How's Dean, Ginny?" it said that GINNY had said it, when it was obviously DRACO. And, also, Draco was a tiny bit OOC ;) But other than, lovely. Good job! ++Author's Response: Thanks so much, and I'll change that error as soon as I'm done of all these reviews, and thanks for the tip! Report Review
really sweet! draco and ginny make the perfect couple Author's Response: Thank you very much. Report Review
I LOVED IT great job megs great job...it was really really greatAuthor's Response: THank you Tarra, I really appreciate it! Report Review
Its brilliant, but I want to know, did Draco and Ginny both have affairs?Author's Response: Thank you and Ginny was the one who had an affair. Report Review
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