pretty good. i liked the story alot but i can totally feel for lily. its almost as if she was forced into liking him. thats the feeling i get in alot of these stories and even though im a big jameslily fan id like to see her get her way for once!

Author's Response: Ever since Deathly Hallows I've felt that way, too. I REALLY wish Rowling had showed us what it was that convinced Lily that James was a great person, because from what we've seen, it would've made more sense for her to push him into the lake. Sheesh. And I LOVE James/Lily too. I just want it to make...sense. LOL.

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OH I WISH IT DIDNT END I LOVED IT

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please write more

Author's Response: To this story? Well, this one is finished, but I'll definitely continue writing other fics. Thanks for reviewing! :-)

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Oh wow that's good!! BTW I'm the person who reviewed five of your stories and signed 'anonymous'...' and once misspelled it and signed 'ananymous...'. Hi!! That was so good, i loved the ending and I loved how James was flirting. LOL

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I really appreciate it. And thank you for reviewing all of my other stories, too.

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I JUST LOVE IT! IT TOTALLY ROCKS!

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gud story!! In the picture thing you have what is the actress that you have?

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm thrilled you liked it. And the actress is Kirsten Dunst. ^_^

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cute :-)

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I totally agree with everything yu say in yur authors note...they are hard to write about =S and most stories end up almost the same in the end. Anyhoo, i loved this n_n

-Alex-

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you liked it even though it's horribly cliched. LOL. Thanks for reviewing! :-)

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It was a little cliched but it was still funny!! - :) Charmedlily

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Great! KIU!!

10/10

Cheerz!!

~Sirius

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ha what does she know, they ended up married witha child! that was good, sweet and adorable!

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cliche or no cliche it was good i liked it a lot
top stuff

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well, I'm back! I really liked it. Again you inspired me 2 write a story (You inspired me after Hermione's diary 2. I review u there 2) now im writing 3. one about james/lily, one harry/hermione, and one, gonig back and forth, and comparing how alkie they were

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A cute little story. It does seem like that was pretty close to how those two would get together. The words Peter Pettigrew are like a portal for me because it makes me think of all the horrible things he has done and really makes me want to become violent. (Boy, where did that come from?)
Anyway, a good possible scenario for how their relationship could have started.

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you thought so. And yes...Pettigrew...you just want to go into the story and throttle him sometimes...lol. Thanks for reviewing! :-)

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Who are you kidding! That rocked! If I knew how to add favs, I would!

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it was completely amamzing!!!! can't think of anything to else to say, really...oh yeah! incidentally (no other word fits), was that kirsten dunst on your banner?

Author's Response: Thanks so much! That means a lot to me. And yes, that was Kirsten Dunst. Cute little thing she is...lol. ^_^ :-)

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awww...very cute...

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add on to it! please! it was so sweet, and i reeeally want to know what happens on their date!

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yay! loved it :3

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OK, I'm pretty sure I already reviewed this, but I just reread it again, and I really have to say that they are adorable. It may be cliched, but someimes the best way to go is to write the way thats tried and true. (another cliche) (but still. you get my point.) (right?) (i hope so.) (if not, I fear for your intelligence and sanity...:) Roighty, stopping with the parentheses now. Anyway, they are written just the way I flirt with this guy at school, and that gives me some hope...maybe I'll end up with him and all will end well. oh dear, there go the cliches again! But I'm digressing, so...lets just say you are being inspiring and leave it at that, shall we? You ought to write a publishable (is that a word?) book- one that doesn't have any annoying little copyright issues, and I bet you anything it would fly off the shelves faster than a speeding...er...something fast that is non-cliched! You're a great writer! I shall go now, and not torment you with my insanity any longer. Au revoir, ma belle...er...writere? something like that.

Author's Response: LOL. Don't worry. I understood every word you said. And I actually suck at writing if it's not Harry Potter related...because I have no ideas. lol. I always think I do, and I get one page down, and...it disappears. lol. I'm thrilled that you liked it! :-)

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You should try to write another L/J because this was awesome, and I like L/J better than H/Hr, anyway. :p

Author's Response: It's just that L/J is extremely hard for me to write, and I don't like writing it as much as H/Hr (a bit of a conflict there, hmm? *laughs*). I'm really honored that you liked it that much, and I appreciate your review! :-)

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that was a really good story! i wish it wasn't a one-shot.......good job!

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awww, it was cute

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that was awesome. write another l/j cuz this was really sweet.

Author's Response: I honestly don't know if I can write another L/J...lol. I don't think I have enough talent for that. *laughs* Thanks for your review! :-)

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that was a great story shame it was a one-shot i want to read more

Author's Response: Aw, thanks so much, but yeah, it has no where else to go after that...lol. Thanks for the review! :-)

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