I'd just like to offeryou my opinion on this amazing story:
1. What where you thinking naming 'winston' "Ranulf"?? This is too hilarious to even comprehend. As a Norwegian, I know a thing or two about Norwegian names, and this is just too hilarious.
2. You must know that Google translate is really sucky and translated nearly all of your Norwegian sentences wrong in those few chapters someone spoke Norwegian. I found it quite funny x)
3. I absolutely love your story so much, it's like the best fanfiction I've ever read. What would just make my day, though, would be if Kristen had a change in heart and started actually being voldemort's spy instead of the order's.. It would go really well with the fact that she's referring to Voldy as The Dark Lord now, apparently..
Until next chapter comes up, I will be biting my nails, really excited to see what will happen later! So you really should write a new chapter soon, if you don't want me to end up a nail-less freak! Report Review
I think this is the best FanFic I've ever read (and I have read it twice already!).
I love Kristen, The Beatles, Sirius Black, The Marauders and Tom Riddle. And the plot is absolutely awesome, how did you came up with such great ideas? Your writing is good as well.
I really enjoyed reading this, and I'd love to know what happens next!
- A fan of yours :) Report Review
I've had this story on my to be read list for a while now but I've always held off seeing as it's been a while since it's been updated, but I had to start reading it eventually. Good start, curious as to where you're taking this. Report Review
Three Houses? What about slyltherin Report Review
wish you'd update the next chapter:( its been so long i love this story so much!! xoxox Report Review
I love this chapter. I love how you make Sirius so comfortable with the situation. I also have to admit I laughed my ass off at the part where he shouted something about Snape having a crush on Remus. Absolutely fucking hilarious. I also enjoy the bit of Jily you threw in! Report Review
You really need to come back and update! I'm totally in love with your story. Report Review
real name! haaha my last name really is black:)! but they are 11... shouldnt they do 11 year old things? Report Review
Aww james is jealous cause his two friends aren't paying him attention. 9/10 : ) Report Review
They kissed 9/10 : ) Report Review
Haha kristen likes james 9/10 : ) Report Review
I think sirius likes her. 9/10 : ) Report Review
Good chapter. 9/10 : ) Report Review
I want a monkey 9/10 : ) Report Review
Wow sirius isnt very nice. 9/10 : ) Report Review
James and kristen are so cute 9/10 : ) Report Review
Kristen should tell her parents. If they kick her out she could live with the potters. 9//10 : ) Report Review
This was interesting. 8/10 : ) Report Review
I feel bad, I've just read all 104 chapters w out review once, but it was just so good I couldn't stop, not even for a second! Loll ok so ur story is amazingg, and please update soonn! Thx bye! Report Review
Update soon please!!! I love your story! Report Review
On the norwegian part, did you use Google translate, because I am norwegian, and half of it didnt have a meaning?
You write amazing though, and in a so exciting way. Report Review
This is still my favorite story on HPFF. I love your writing so very much and I really hope you plan on continuing with this at some point. I think I started reading this story about four years ago, and I still love it. The characters you have created seem so real and it is easy to get attached to them. I'd be lying if I said I wouldn't be upset if I never found out what happened to them all. You are a wonderful writer and person, and I really hope that you finish this story.
10/10 as always.
-Victoire Report Review
Omg please update soon! This is brilliant Report Review
That chapter was so moving and I ended up crying when Remus brought up Kristen cutting herself the last time she had gotten that depressed. Oddly enough really sad chapters that make me cry are my favorite because I can really feel what the character feels and that means I have gotten really involved in a story, it's well written or both. For this chapter I would have to say both. I really hope Kristen goes back to being her normal argumentative self with Sirius and that he never calls her a mudblood again. Report Review
So, I'm a die hard potterhead. I really do love your story so far, but I almost stopped reading it altogether because you said that the dark mark is typically on the right arm. When in actuality the dark mark is ALWAYS on the left forearm. I've noticed a few other mistakes that I believe you should check out. I do like your story so far though. Report Review
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