I enjoyed the stream-of-consciousness feel of the one shot itself, but I think your Ron was almost TOO ooc.

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That was hilarious! I really enjoyed delving into the mind of Ron Weasley!

You depicted it very well, congratulations! PERFECT CLASS! LOL, Trelawny

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I completely believe Ron could think like this. Kudos.

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*rotfl* that was sooo funny! I loved it! :D

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Haha. Funny! *laughs*

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ya that did make my head hurt a little!

Author's Response: lol I don't know if that's a good thing or a bad thing. *gigglesnort* Thanks for the review.
Tonya

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That was hilarious! I love it how everything he thinks goes straight back to Hermione. And the whole Harry-PERHAPS-thinking-about-Ginny-and-how-he-should-stop-it-this-instant (aka HPTAGAHHSSITI). Excellent.

Author's Response: hehe Thanks for the review. Glad you enjoyed!
:heartness: Tonya

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*still giggling* That was funny! You should do a chapter two!

Author's Response: Thanks for the review. I am glad you enjoyed it, but there will be no chapter two. Sorry! It was meant to be a one-shot!
Rock On
Tonya

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excellent, i love ur fic. it really does seem like Ron’s way of thinking!

Author's Response: hehe Thank you. I love Ron, but God help him. lol I really do think this is how his mind works too. He's a little messed up in the head. lol Thank you for the review. :hearts: Tonya

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lol this was hilarious and really good!

Author's Response: Thank you. I'm glad you enjoyed it. I really enjoyed writing it. Thanks for the review. :hearts: Tonya

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So true...So Ron...Thinking of things he can't have...Hermione...

Author's Response: Yes, yes he does. He seems to think about things he can't have a lot of the time. :P I love Ron though. Well, thank you for the review. :hearts: Tonya

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Hehe. It was fun reading this. Although I was really hoping you had made this fic longer, so that I'll stop myself getting frustrated because the humorous fic was kind of short that satisfy of thirst for laughter. Nice work. =)

Author's Response: The reason it is not longer is because this was written on an accident. I was trying to write a fic for a challenge that I entered, and made a fic that didn't even have the right character. I don't know why. Oh well, thank you for the review. :hearts: Tonya

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hahahahaa... hahaha.. hahahah... *gasps* hahahahahahahaha

Author's Response: Why thank you. *bows* It seems you enjoyed it. Thank you for the review. :hearts: Tonya

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"Scribble, scribble, scribble on the parchment so that it looks like I am working. La-de-da." oh my goodness I laughed so hard when I read that. that right there is me in public speaking, everyday! this was a funny fic, I thought it was hilarious how he jumped around so much.

Author's Response: :D Thank you. I love that line. It was mega fun to write this fic and well, I'm glad you enjoyed it so much. Thank you so much for the review. You just brightened my spirits....which really needed brightening. :P Thank you again. :hearts: Tonya

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Hehehe. ^-^ Pretty funny, and no offense or anything but this kind of looks like it was rushed. A bit of editing and touching up wouldn't hurt. All in all, it was pretty good. ^_^ -Taylor

Author's Response: Thank you. Really, no one has said anything about it looking rushed. *thinks* I'll go check it out....but I don't remember anything. If you are reffering(sp?) to the way Ron's mind just literally jumps from one subject to another...well...that's because it is Ron. Also, this was written in 5 minutes...on accident. So I would doubt it if there were lots of mistakes if that is what you were talking about. Well thank you for the review. :hearts: Tonya

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So Ron. Brilliant, you captured his teaspoo-er, I mean mind perfectly :-) Loved it!

Author's Response: Thank you. I love writing Ron. At first I was a little worried about writing a Humor, because I normally stick to angst, romance, and fluffy stories. But I'm glad I did try this. Thank you for the wonderful review, and I'm glad you enjoyed it. :hearts: Tonya

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haha...poor Ron!!!...'s okay...Hermy loves him!!!!....i like the part where he tries not to think about her...that was a VERY funny story!!!!

Author's Response: Thank you. I'm glad you enjoyed it. This fic is becoming my pride and joy. :D Thank you for the review. :hearts: Tonya

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This was really funny!! I liked it alot.

Author's Response: Thank you. Glad you enjoyed it. I had fun writing it. Thank you for the review. :hearts: Tonya

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Damn, this is hilarious!!! hehehehe.

Author's Response: Thank you. I'm glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for the review. :hearts: Tonya

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aww thats cute!

Author's Response: Thank you. Glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for the review. :hearts: Tonya

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This fic is hysterical! It definitely shows the real Ron. Nervous, somehwhat stupid, etc. A little more detail would be nice though. Every time I review a story I look for detail. It makes the story more interesting and will have your readers feel like they are actually watching the event happen. Other than that it was nicely done.

Author's Response: Thank you. I'm glad you enjoyed it. I don't know about the details. I have a hard time writing them when I write in 1st Person. Anywho! Thank you for the review. :hearts: Tonya

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i loved it! & the funny thing is thats probably the way rons mind works!

Author's Response: Hehe! Yeah, that's what effect I was going for. I'm glad you liked this. Thank you for the review. :hearts: Tonya

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Hey, this story is wicked. I really like it. So funny... Keep up the good writing.

Author's Response: Thank you. I'm glad you enjoyed it. I had fun writing it. :D Thanks for the review. :hearts: Tonya

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that was really funny. perfect representation. i think that is what goes through his head. that explains why he is so confused!

Author's Response: Thank you. I'm glad you like it. I know...if he thinks like that all the time...it makes sense. :P Thank you for the review. :hearts: Tonya

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Kool with a kapital k.

Author's Response: hehe That made me giggle. :)) I'm glad you liked it. Thanks for the review. :hearts: Tonya

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