{reviewid: 1708295, reviewer: 'kyrandia'}
12th November 2007:
aw cute
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{reviewid: 1320075, reviewer: 'sophie_is_a_cutie'}
25th February 2007:
awww! that was really cute! good one
Author's Response: thankyou, im glad u enjoyed it
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{reviewid: 1280979, reviewer: 'QUEEN'}
26th January 2007:
GREAT STORY!!!
Author's Response: thankyou. im glad you liked it
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{reviewid: 1195917, reviewer: 'crazee4life'}
14th November 2006:
A-M-A-Z-I-N-G story and plot line.
Author's Response: thnx. iM glad you liked it.
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{reviewid: 1162847, reviewer: 'Harrypotterlover5654'}
13th October 2006:
I LOVED IT! Thanks for rbewing my story!
Author's Response: thnx i liked your story!!!
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{reviewid: 1112370, reviewer: 'HarryandGinny%20Fan'}
21st August 2006:
great story!!!!! super great! 10/10
please read my one-shot: 'a glimpse of the future'
ake a sequal soon!!!!
Author's Response: im not sure im making a sequel IM glad you liked it though! I'll read your story!
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{reviewid: 1059246, reviewer: 'jenjen'}
12th July 2006:
CUTTTE!!!!! I loved that storie. did you conseder doing a sequel. like when they go to school and they new brothers and sisters!! You know? wel let's hope do a sequel. Cuz I wanna read it!
Author's Response: cuh-u-Tey um Thats a good idea I never thought of that.!!! thnkyou im glad you like it!
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{reviewid: 1019780, reviewer: 'jujuju107'}
12th June 2006:
good story . i can't find part 3 . if you havn't written it , please write soon
Author's Response: IM working on it, but Im not if it should be a premature or have a disorder,Im going towards the premature thing
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{reviewid: 952965, reviewer: 'Black%20Lilys'}
27th March 2006:
Hey there! I think this was really cute! I liked it!
Author's Response: thankyou! I love your story too!
gotta myspace?
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{reviewid: 921655, reviewer: 'hailey'}
1st March 2006:
awwwwww how cute i liked kinda predictable but so are all of my stories that i write but i still liked it ~hailey~
Author's Response: thanx it was predictable but it was just a fun fic!
Author's Response: thanx it was predictable but it was just a fun fic!
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{reviewid: 890506, reviewer: 'Paloma%20Patil'}
5th February 2006:
Lily and Evan are lovely names for the twins. That's a very sweet ending! Paloma
Author's Response: thanx I think so too!-qwertyelf
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{reviewid: 886190, reviewer: 'xtonex'}
2nd February 2006:
its fab.... nice names evans kl. <3n the story its sooo brill.bi hunxxx
Author's Response: THANKYOU oh and um do you pronounce it toneay? or tonex? just wondering!
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{reviewid: 873247, reviewer: 'Sapphire'}
24th January 2006:
Great! And it was very sweet!
Author's Response: thankyou
sapphire!
Im very glad you liked it
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{reviewid: 871657, reviewer: 'Life%20after%20death'}
23rd January 2006:
Great story.
Author's Response: thanx glad you think so
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{reviewid: 828669, reviewer: 'sexxygurl'}
27th December 2005:
I love this fic ts pretty funny!
Author's Response: you agaibn but dif spelling?
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{reviewid: 826732, reviewer: 'bobby'}
26th December 2005:
hmmm... no offense or anything, but i was really confused with this one-shot. I could never decifer who was saying what because all the quotations were in the wrong place and you didn't space out the speaking, you just put it all in paragraphs and it was really difficult to read. You might wanna go back and edit those. It also seemed a little OOC, so you also might want to check that. But, please don't get mad and start cursing at me for being a meanie or anything. I'm just telling the truth so you can improve yourself. But really, the story line was great and the whole conflict was humorous. You just might want to edit those few suggestions and your ready to go! Great job writing this, i enjoyed reading it. Keep it up, xoxo
Author's Response: thanx I'll check that!
glad you lied it!
Author's Response: thanx I'll check that!
glad you lied it!
Author's Response: thanx I'll check that!
glad you lied it!
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{reviewid: 779587, reviewer: 'Kimmy'}
22nd November 2005:
Not bad, not bad at all!
Author's Response: thanx its my first ever so thats a good sign!
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