holy goddess
that was amazing
keep writing

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I LOVED IT!!! I was sad happy and angry reading it it was perfect!

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Well, I hope there is a happy ending to Harry's story. This was a great retelling of Lily and James' story. 10/10!! Brilliant. It does stink that it all has to end to badly for them, the Marauders broken up, Lily and James dead, and Harry with the horrible Dursley's. 10/10!!

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Hilarious proposal thing. 10/10!!

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Wow, Dumbledore's age is catching up with him. I'm so glad they're OK, now! 10/10!!

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HURRY! Please, Professor Dumbledore and everyone else! 10/10!!

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YES!! A mirror is their savior! That's a bit odd...

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Uh, I would choose death too. 10/10!! The peices are falling together for everyone.

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SOMEONE SAVE HER! please?

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I really don't know what to say right now. 10/10!!

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Eww.

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I think Voldemort might've set that up. Instead of killing her, he's making her go through a life where she can't have kids, that's just awful! 10/10!! We all know it doesn't work though.

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Oh. My. Goodness. That's awful! They have to find something to help her! 10/10!!

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Oh, poor Kimmy! And, poor Lily! I hope they have something to help her! 10/10!!

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I. Do. Not. Like. Voldemort. Please don't let Lily and James get hurt! 10/10!!

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Wow, I already love James' parents and grandparents. Well, it seems hair is a very important trait in the Potter family. All the men have messy black hair, and all the women have red hair. Ginny and Harry even fit the description! 10/10!!

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Wow, it seems Lily just got a brother. Now, I know there's more between Sirius and Charlie. 10/10!!

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Wow, how you wrote that just completely went into how they could be the ones with Harry and all that. GREAT CHAPTER!! And, I siriusly mean it!
; ) 10/10!!


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A very happy christmas indeed. Now, this is when you needed the title! This title is very good though. I am always being told that when the devil closes one door, God opens another or just a simple window. Either way, he helps you through anything. 10/10!

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Not. A. Very. Good. Title.

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UH-OH! James has a little competition! 10/10!!

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How does it always happen that after a close incounter with a good-looking boy, you get dreams about him? 10/10!! I wonder what's up with Charlie...

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Lily heard that part about "Moony or me?". 10/10!! I'm very excited right now. Great action-packed chapter!

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GREAT PRANK! Now, I wonder if they'll catch 'em? 10/10!!

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Wow, James had to go and ruin it didn't he. Don't ask me why, but as soon as I read that James had said that, I nearly cried! Ok, I'm way too emotional today. 10/10!

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