Reading Reviews for The Dragon Breathes Fire
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Review #1, by tora The Start of the Flame

17th November 2005:
liked the beginning of the story, ceep on writing, it was good. but dont make malfoy too good, becous then he gets kind of boring. and it is also god that you are following j.k rowlings story. that makes it more real. so come on, write next chapter and I will read it and review. good luck!

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