Hahahaha!!! This is soo good!! nice a short...but very good..it made me laugh heaps...just one suggestion...you might want to check how you have used the talking marks "" as sometimes they aren't used were they should be or they don't finish the speach off properly...that's my only suggestion though...good job hahaha

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wait i'm confused, lily and beth snogged eachother?

Author's Response: Um...Yes. I see your point, but it was more lyk Lilly was snoggin Sirius n Beth was snoggin James, which raises a whole new set of questions. God! Now I'm confused!

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What the livig hell was that about lucias and snape

Author's Response: Trust me, It would so happen

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hello jodie i bought tashas b-day present yesterday dont tell her but i bought a Misfits braclet thing and a misfits badge/button set i already have a photo frame and i will put a pic of kurt cobain

Author's Response: Woah! I just bought socks. Maybe I'll get a couple of Kurt pics for her.

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hello ha ha me in it and getting the whole time free time yeahfaenat (odviusly)

Author's Response: Good for you (strangles nat)

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Nat here why was you nae at school iday oh bye the way tasha really mad at you and i'm sorry that she was kicking yourseat if she sees this then she will be mad with me a wee bit

Author's Response: My throat was all swollen and I couldn't stop coughing. I will be back to school on Monday. Don't know why Tasha is gettin her knickers in a twist because I haven't done anything. Keep up the good work with your story can't wait for next chappie.

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hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha

Author's Response: That means you like it right?

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That ending was funny as hell

Author's Response: One of these days I might write a short spoof story. What do you think?

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I think this is a pretty funny story. You are a very creative writer. PLEASE keep producing your stories.

Author's Response: I try

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IMAGES!!!!!!!!!! Wait - they're gone!!!!!! CELEBRATE GOOD TIMES!!!!!!!!

Author's Response: Sorry! Didn't mean to give anyone nightmares

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This story ruled. Very nice. i have one thing to say before i leave. Lucious and Snape are so queer and i knew it. thanks for shining light on it lol.

Author's Response: I think Lucius and Draco are a better pair. **Sigh*** All good things come to an end. I'll miss you (not really)

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lol. that one was good.

Author's Response: I liked it too. Ha ha

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I liked James' attempt. hope you don't mind me reveiwing each chapter.

Author's Response: It's quarter to ten in the morning, I really have nothing better to do.

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I forgot to put this in my last reveiw. your right GOF sucked big um um hehehe wand

Author's Response: I found 72 things wrong with that film. I know I'm sad but oh well. And I couldn't think of another word to use.

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Hahahaha "man-whore" The dpg's name was interesting to

Author's Response: I think that's the perfect way to describe Sirius but my friend disagrees. But only because she loves him.

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Yeah using your frined's name would be kind of awkward. P.S. the story's getting better thats for sure. CHapters kinda small thought.

Author's Response: You are so cheeky you little monkey. But I'm glad you like it anyway.

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LOL! I liked the gravestone bit and the (insert swear of your choice)

Author's Response: I stole that from a book called Maximum Ride. It's great read it and I swear you will love it.

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Still good. (very interesting author notes)

Author's Response: I can't remember what I wrote but thanks I think.

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This is the second story of yours i've read.(first was Lingere PArty) i added you to fave authors and checked out your other stories so far its good. I had no doubts lol.

Author's Response: None of my other fans have ever reviewed all ten chapters you must be bored but I will respond too them all.

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try writting the things that you would want to do or experinces sorry if I spelld anything rong.

Author's Response: I Might try it Thanks for the advice

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Heloooo- did you get my email? i email you the code for the new pic.. you know wat. i think im switching to mugglenet. fanfiction. yup. theyre more convenient

Author's Response: It's not working! Damn this bloody site!

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just put it in the old code since this site is soooooooo efffed up

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ya i dno why it revied twice.. anyways i think youlll have to just right click on the part that sayd "image hosted by photobucket..." go to properties and copy the website. than put that in

Author's Response: So I just put the same cod in? Thanks for yuor help. This damned site is going to be the death of us all. P.S Anytime you feel like making a banner I have other bannerless stories */Hint Hint/*

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hope its good :D

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hope its good :D

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