Reading Reviews for Under the Cover of Darkness
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Review #1, by Summer_Raven Under the Cover of Darkness

7th July 2016:
This was an interesting story. I liked the mystery throughout of who was being killed. I did think it was Voldemort until the end; that was a good plot twist. One suggestion I have is to vary your sentence length. You had a lot of long, sometimes run-on sentences and very few short ones. At least for me, it would be easier to read if some of the longer sentences were broken up. Overall, this was a good story and I liked it. Keep up the good work!!

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Review #2, by AshHa Under the Cover of Darkness

21st March 2007:
Oh, how sad, and cruel!! This story was brilliant, it had me wanting to know what happened next. I like it, just it makes me so sad. 10/10

Author's Response: Thanks, AshHa. This was the first story I wrote here, so I'm glad that there are people still enjoying it.

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Review #3, by Irishladybugz7 Under the Cover of Darkness

27th May 2006:
Whoa! That was far out there but proves Moodys point..... You never can know who or what you will do under the curse. I still liked it. I can't really tell you why but I did. LOL well till next time, Dawnlee

Author's Response: I can't actually see it happening, Dawnlee, but you are correct. They can force you to do anything under the curse. Look at Madame Rosemerta! I'm glad that you liked it, but even if you hadn't, that would be okay, because it's not really the kind of story that you want to read at the end of the day. Thanks for reviewing, though!

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Review #4, by andharrywokeup Under the Cover of Darkness

18th April 2006:
Horrible. (which is a compliment considering the story content, very well done.)

Author's Response: I'm glad you thought so! ; ) For as awful as this is I enjoyed writing every minute of it.

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Review #5, by MugglebornWitch Under the Cover of Darkness

18th March 2006:
Oh my GOD!! That ... it ... wow. Oh ... wow. I just... well done. Sad. But very well done indeed. Now I'm a little mad at Hermione, but it wasn't really her fault. But she killed Ron ... oh man. I have... well, I have words but they're not realy coherent. Just ... great job.

Author's Response: Wow, that was the least coherent and probably the best review I could have gotten! Thank you so much! Sometimes I can't believe I wrote that, but I have to say, I enjoyed every minute of it.

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Review #6, by marauderin_around Under the Cover of Darkness

26th January 2006:
Talk about a suprise ending! I really did not expect that. Though this was dark it was still thoroughly enjoyable.

Author's Response: Thanks! I really hoped to be able to shock everyone at the end. As dark as it was I really had fun trying to write it!

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Review #7, by Paloma Patil Under the Cover of Darkness

14th January 2006:
Oh my god - You got me! I had a sense that it was the Weasleys, but I didn't see the ending coming at all...Hermione...under the Imperius curse???? That is tragic!!!! Nice work! Paloma

Author's Response: Thanks Paloma... that's what I was going for!!! I appreciate you taking the time to review!

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Review #8, by Inspiration Under the Cover of Darkness

30th December 2005:
That was kind of confusing. And depressing. If this ever happened to Harry, then he would lose to Voldie.

Author's Response: Hey, thanks for being my first review. I feel like this story has been up for forever. I was kind of depressed when I wrote this story, and yeah, Harry would probably lose if he lost everyone like that. But bad things happen to good people sometimes.

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