Loved it! Great ending!

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Hahahahaha! I loved this story!
It had great plot twists and it was just an altogether enjoyable read!
Personally though I pictured Lily as being a bit more sugar, spice and everything nice. But your Lily adds much need drama.
Good job!

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That one part:

Having finished returning the books to the correct place on the shelves, he began to browse through some of the more dangerous looking volumes.

Passing over 1001 Ways to Revenge an Errant Lover and How to Kill Someone Without Arousing Suspicion, his eyes landed on the mouldy looking tome, Moste Potente Potions.


Was probably the best. I like the one about the killing of the person. It KILLED me. :)

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i don't understand why you wrote 888 a whole bunch of times. i know it shows that you are writing about something else, but why did you use 888???

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HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! ok im gunna stop laffin now just cuz i need 2 thats 4 the hole stry not just this chappie tho this 1s funny!!! i realy luv the whole thing and i like the idea of a sequel but i dunno if youll have time with like 15 awsum strys... but ya its really good and i like it lots! 1 too many zeros to count/10

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STUPID SIRIUS!
And I LOVE that game. I have several expansion packs.
10/10 ^_^

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Wow! Great story! I was a little hesitant to read Lily/James back when I first read this, but you've convinced me! Great job, it's going on my favorites!!!

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at most parts of the story i didn't want 2 keep reading. Not because of your writing but just because i didn't want something bad to happen and I felt bad for Lily anf James. It was well-written and ended great. I LOVE the part about Sirius turning into a fat, short, bald, old guy. Hilarious.

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Really cute story! I enjoyed reading it

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Ahahahhahahahhahahahahahha.
Thats all I can say.

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Hahaha!!! Good ending! I enjoyed this story greatly! It is in my favorites. But then again, a few of your stories (and you yourself) are. Anyway though, I love the flyers! Very funny! But the water fight is still the best part if you ask me. Please keep writing, I love your stories! You're a very good writer and that shouldn't go to waste. Until next time!

~Elizabeth

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Sirius, ugly? Not fare. Not right. But good for the story I guess. I like my stuck between looking like Sirius and James still, but that would have been really hot, not bad so...yeah. I like the water fight. They're so much fun! I was once in a 3 hour long water fight in which I ran barefoot around a whole fair ground, oh and it was all buckets, not water guns or wet soapy rags, just buckets. It was awesome. But anyway!. I didn't even get the "first kiss" thing until Lily pointed it out. Good job on the whole chapter, I think it was my fav, but then again I haven't read the last one. So I'm gonna do that now. I want to know what happens!

~Elizabeth

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What!?!?! The only thing I can think of is that maybe Sirius' stuck inbetween looking like himself and James (two hotties in one!), but it's didn't turn out good! I'm so glad this is fully written or I light have tried to kill you here! lol Bye now!


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Very good, I liked it alot. But one question. Why did the Potions Professor go from Slughorn to Hylton? Just wondering. I've made mistakes like that before myself. Thought yo umight want to know though. Anyway, I don't have to much time so I have to go on while I can.

~Elizabeth

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Ooo! What happens next? I have to know! Bye!



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Hmm... that was good. I'm gonna have to read on and find out more. Though I'm pretty sure I know what Sirius' plan is.

~Elizabeth

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That was so cute! I loved it! I didn't think I'd enjoy any James and Lily stories, but you convinced me!This story is definitely on my favorites list.

Author's Response: Thankyou :) I'm glad I convinced you that Lily/James is good - it's one of my favourite fics :D

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It WAS a funny story! I loved it! Although I thought what they did to Sirius was a bit harsh, but it was FUNNY!

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DUN! DUN! DUH! OMG!!! Love this chapter, and LOVEd how you began it, the humor was funny!!!

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Oi! what happened to Padfoot?!! Sounds like it's serious!!

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OoO! I love how the story is going!!

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Oh!111 yeah!

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I loved this chapter! Great how your taking this slow!

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hahaha this story is really funny and refreshing. i like that it wasnt so long.
10

Author's Response: Thankyou! I'm glad you enjoyed it :)

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Amazing story. I loved Every bit of it. but for some reason I cant add it to my favorites

Author's Response: Thankyou! I'm glad you liked it. Pity you can't add it to your favourites :D

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