{reviewid: 1907907, reviewer: 'ShadedRaven'}
27th April 2008:
YOU'VE SERIOUSY HAVE TO WRITE MORE!!! This story is just addictive! Please write more!!!
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{reviewid: 1486804, reviewer: 'Samhria'}
29th June 2007:
Uh oh.big trouble in store for the "lovely couple".
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{reviewid: 1486783, reviewer: 'Samhria'}
29th June 2007:
What a bitch! Honestly.
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{reviewid: 1486776, reviewer: 'Samhria'}
29th June 2007:
Ouch. Not a very nice remark at the end...but its Ron...what more can you expect?
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{reviewid: 1486766, reviewer: 'Samhria'}
29th June 2007:
Hahaha! Perfect timing Godric! lol. I wonder what "special" someone will be helping Harry with his training now.
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{reviewid: 1485038, reviewer: 'Samhria'}
28th June 2007:
Hermione, I'm guessing with the ending there.
Nice chapter. I really enjoyed it.
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{reviewid: 1485035, reviewer: 'Samhria'}
28th June 2007:
Okay, just a sec. After the whole "what was" thingy, what exactly was Harry's response to that? And why did Godric tell him that story?
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{reviewid: 1485021, reviewer: 'Samhria'}
28th June 2007:
Oh, come on now darlin'!!! What's with the cliffys'?? Honestly they are intriguing, but annoying at the same time! lolz. Let's just see what's in store for our lil "hero" now.
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{reviewid: 1485014, reviewer: 'Samhria'}
28th June 2007:
Damn, ain't that the truth?! lol. Love the quote and cliffy...goes together wonderfully. Great job.
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{reviewid: 1485007, reviewer: 'Samhria'}
28th June 2007:
Ouch! He got a taste of his medicine!
Honestly, I do think in reality that "the boy who lived" Harry Potter is shallow of others' feelings. Perhaps that's because of how J.K. Rowling created him...who knows?? He's oblivious to a lot of things in her stories. lolz. But I still love them!
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{reviewid: 1484985, reviewer: 'Samhria'}
28th June 2007:
Oh, don't be so mean! It's not the end of the world if no one reviews; just be happy that so many people are reading lol. ^_~
And very nice cliffhanger. Can't wait to see what happens next.
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{reviewid: 1484974, reviewer: 'Samhria'}
28th June 2007:
"Well done" and yes.I do like the story so far. As for the criticism.eh.
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{reviewid: 1484968, reviewer: 'Samhria'}
28th June 2007:
Very short at that. lol. Short but sweet. ^^
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{reviewid: 1484963, reviewer: 'Samhria'}
28th June 2007:
Hahaha! I would have guessed PMS! lolz!!! But gotta read on to know for sure. Nice start.
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{reviewid: 1438826, reviewer: 'Annonoymus'}
30th May 2007:
update soon!
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{reviewid: 1433585, reviewer: 'everHermione'}
26th May 2007:
I like this story because there are many whys to go with it.
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{reviewid: 1415501, reviewer: 'luving_harry_potter'}
13th May 2007:
How could you? Killing Remus, :( Poor Harry, great story otherwise though, but poor Remus, and poor Tonks, evil person you are, great Harry/Hermione moments though
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{reviewid: 1403750, reviewer: 'DarkWizardKiller'}
2nd May 2007:
Ok...I'm going to be brutally honest with you. This story is not starting off very good. First, you need to research your spells. May I suggest the Harry Potter Lexicon for all things of the Wizarding World. Next, slow down a little bit. The story is moving so fast that I can't catch my breath and I have no clue as to what is going on. Develope your story. Develope your characters, (even though they belong to someone else, you can still give them your own personality) Develope a plot and help the reader "see" your tale by using descriptive text.
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{reviewid: 1403552, reviewer: 'DangerDog'}
2nd May 2007:
Hm. it was a great chapter! There are just certain things that bother me. Where was Gryffindor during Hermione's torture. Shouldn't he be more powerful than Voldemort? Or at least a match? That's how I imagined it all. As for later, I completely understand the cliffhanger, I wonder who it is? Probably not Voldemort.
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{reviewid: 1332622, reviewer: 'l00n3yl0v3g00d'}
7th March 2007:
Holy crap. That's so sad!
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{reviewid: 1332606, reviewer: 'l00n3yl0v3g00d'}
7th March 2007:
Aww. So sweet.
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{reviewid: 1332601, reviewer: 'l00n3yl0v3g00d'}
7th March 2007:
Nice. don't really get what it has to do with the training... or what the training has to do with the story...
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{reviewid: 1332599, reviewer: 'l00n3yl0v3g00d'}
7th March 2007:
Oh jeez. How depressing!
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{reviewid: 1332593, reviewer: 'l00n3yl0v3g00d'}
7th March 2007:
Umm. Very cool. I want a lion.
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{reviewid: 1332589, reviewer: 'l00n3yl0v3g00d'}
7th March 2007:
What the flaming eff?!
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