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Review #1, by Hermione Spencer (not logged in) Chapter One

1st June 2013:
i would love to read more!!

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Review #2, by Sky Goddess Chapter One

21st July 2006:
i aint seeing no romance. also, is harry dead? btw, i love the SI.

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Review #3, by Sky Goddess Chapter One

12th July 2006:
uh huh...Harry's dead?
oh, and it kinda hangs off wiht Draco and Luna...like you never finished the story...no offense. there a sequel?

Author's Response: That was only the first chapter. I'm in the process of rewriting and revamping everything involved with several stories. Thanks for the review.

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Review #4, by LoVeMeTrUe Chapter One

5th December 2005:
hm.... this is rather interesting. I've never read anything with Luna as the main charecter. Again with this story is the grammer which could be fixed through use of a beta. I think this story has potential and I do how you make it continue. My only advice is don't make Draco a big softy because then he becomes so fake I guess. That is the mistake many people make when they write a romance story with Draco in it. I'm not saying you will of course.

Author's Response: I've been looking around for a beta, but I haven't really had the time to post anything due to homework and *cheers* snow. I'll try and get one though (= I agree that my grammar and whatnot have to be checked. I dunno where I'm going with Draco yet, so I can't really answer that. I want him to remain a Slytherin, though, and not magically revert to the ways of a Hufflepuff or a Gryffindor. It just doesn't work like that in my opinion =\ Anyway, thanks bunches for the review! I really appreciate your taking the time to read and fill out that little form ^^

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Review #5, by sauerkraut_poet Chapter One

19th November 2005:
Please don't put yourself down in your A/N, by saying you "can't write romance". It really turns people off from the story. I do appreciate what you're feeling though - I'm not much of a romance person either, and it continues to mystify me that romance is the biggest and most popular category on this site, lol. I really admire you for taking a shot at it, something that I'd be too embarrassed to even try doing, and it makes me sad to see you put yourself down like that. =(

That said, I found this a wonderfully unique portrayal of Luna's character. We don't see much of her in the books, and it's so nice to speculate on what goes on in that mysterious little head. =) You add an amazing depth to her personality which I never envisioned before. Also, I love how you turn Draco into such a mystery. Why is he back? Why is he hurting himself? What does he care about? Will he ever let himself be truly loved? I look forward to your answers for all of these questions. One thing I did notice was that you had quite a bit of tense conflict in your verbs - some are in past tense and some in present tense, and it gets a little confusing. Anyway, great job, and hope my review helped somewhat! =)

Author's Response: Thank you!! I LOVE constructive reviews! ^^ I apologize for multitasking while reading through! I can't concentrate when there's something else going on, and the news certainly didn't help when I attempted to edit this. I'll definitely go back over everything!! Wow; I've never had someone say they "admire" me before. I really appreciate that! I'll go back and change my A/N for you-- a friend of mine who read through it said it was a "complete train wreck," so I based the note off of her opinion. I'm thrilled she's apparently wrong! I'm also glad you liked my view of Luna and Draco! Those questions you posted are excellent for guidelines for my story, and I'll be sure to answer them ^_^ Thank you soooooo much for taking the time for the wonderful review!! =D

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Review #6, by EvilSmurfa Chapter One

17th November 2005:
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Author's Response: OMG! THANK YOU! lhotf I'm glad you like it!! I'm horrible at romance, and I seriously considered deleting this story if no one reviewed. Y'never know though. Thank you!!

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