{reviewid: 945909, reviewer: 'pissed'}
20th March 2006:
this sux
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{reviewid: 945719, reviewer: 'opissed'}
20th March 2006:
they are all short!
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{reviewid: 945714, reviewer: 'amn'}
20th March 2006:
remus is so totlay out of character
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{reviewid: 283953, reviewer: 'I_Love_Moony'}
4th December 2004:
I liked the story but I think you tried to write too much in a short space there was too much happening at once.
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{reviewid: 89323, reviewer: 'Paige'}
27th December 2003:
Who's Ginger? Im me on Yahoo
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{reviewid: 74538, reviewer: 'AmyPadfootLupin'}
19th October 2003:
It's an excellent plot line, but the speling and grammar's a bit off. I also think that the chapter's should be longer, and you should work on punctuation. Also, whenever someone speaks, you should press enter twice, so that it's not all just one big paragraph. When it's all one paragraph it gets a little hard to read. Also, you jumped into the plot a bit too quickly. I think it should have taken a bit longer for them to fall in love. Love should never be so rushed. I realize that they had already known each other, bit... still. I'm sorry you lost your friend. I've lost several people. My grandmother and grandfather, and my mother's cousin committed suicide several years ago. It's really depressing, I know how you must feel of have felt.
Also, will you read some of my stories? You don't need to if you don't want to, of course. Just asking. And please don't consider this a flame. It's constructive critisism. I never leave flames. If I truly hate a story, I stop reading them, but I never, ever leave flames. I really enjoyed your story to the end. These are just tips. ~Luv, AmyPadfootLupin~
Author's Response: Soory adout all of that. thanks for the review. I Know i rushed it at the end. i didnt realy like how it turend out. thanks for the tips
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{reviewid: 73367, reviewer: 'utada'}
13th October 2003:
could anyone help me with a second one?
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{reviewid: 73364, reviewer: 'chicablue18'}
| Review #8, by chicablue18 | Ginger |
13th October 2003:
oh wow I'm sorry I lost a friend too his name was Justin. = (
Author's Response: I'm sorry
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{reviewid: 73363, reviewer: 'chicablue18'}
13th October 2003:
that is good story r u gong to do a sequal !!!!= )
Author's Response: Yes i'll make a sequal
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{reviewid: 73361, reviewer: 'prue'}
13th October 2003:
What!!!!!!!!!!
No, write more,or make a seqil!!! Please!!!!!
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{reviewid: 73360, reviewer: 'chicablue18'}
13th October 2003:
That was a great chapter and I hope you update soon this story is so good!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!= )
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{reviewid: 73346, reviewer: 'prue'}
13th October 2003:
You up-dated fast!!!! Thats a good thing!!! write more,this story is really good.Do you want to be in my story??,i'll add more 2 obssed soon.
P.S.H.F.R!!!!!!!!
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{reviewid: 73345, reviewer: 'prue'}
13th October 2003:
Add more!!!!!!!!!
P.S.H.F.R!!!
AND CAN U EMAIL ME THAT PIC OF TOM AND ANOTHER GIRL??,she's going to freak out!!!!
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{reviewid: 73260, reviewer: 'chicablue18'}
12th October 2003:
U had to leave me hanging huh!!!! plz update soon plzzzzzzzzzz!!!!!! i LUV this story = )
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{reviewid: 73220, reviewer: 'prue'}
12th October 2003:
PLEASE WRITE MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Hooded figures rocks!!!!!
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{reviewid: 73176, reviewer: 'prue'}
12th October 2003:
Awsome!!!!!!!!
Please add more!!!!!!!
Author's Response: Hey!! we heard the kelly / tom song
"magic stick" Yesterday. Hehehe:)
OMG Kelly is going to be mad we saw a pic of Tom Felton and a GIRL
He had his arm around her.
(They where very close.)
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{reviewid: 73167, reviewer: 'chicablue18'}
12th October 2003:
I know I KNOW he's the wolf that killed her friend I THINK??????????? well this is a good story plz update soon!
Author's Response: Verry close! You almost have it but he isnt the wolf
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{reviewid: 73090, reviewer: 'prue'}
11th October 2003:
This story is awsome!!!!!!!!!!! You have to add more!!!!!!!!
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{reviewid: 73083, reviewer: 'erin'}
11th October 2003:
Hey, the story is really good, but would you please be more careful with your typing? I mean, I don't really like seeing: she had a dreem a dream abuot....I like to see: She had a dream. A dream about....I'm just really weird about that.
Author's Response: Ok ya well i was half asleep when i was doing that and i was going to fix it when i got the time!
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{reviewid: 73079, reviewer: 'siriussnape'}
11th October 2003:
pretty interesting story. Might I suggest that you check your spelling? Whenever you wrote where, it was supposed to be were. It's good to have proper spelling and grammar when writing a story.
~Siriussnape~
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{reviewid: 73023, reviewer: 'baby_gurl'}
11th October 2003:
i wont worry about it being soooo short... but i ove it soooooooo much thanks 4 the review ~~~~baby_gurl~~~~
Author's Response: This. people uasly complain about the short chapters.
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{reviewid: 73000, reviewer: 'chicablue18'}
11th October 2003:
that was another great chapter
Author's Response: Thanks
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{reviewid: 72998, reviewer: 'chicablue18'}
11th October 2003:
nice chapter plz!!!!! update soon = )
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{reviewid: 72987, reviewer: 'Kai'}
11th October 2003:
This is cool. I wonder if Ginger is gonna fall in love with our handsome Werewolf! Hehe. Oh Thanks for reviewing my stories!
Author's Response: Your welcome
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{reviewid: 72862, reviewer: 'chicablue18'}
10th October 2003:
it was good and I hope you can update soon plz!!!!!!!!!!= )
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