{reviewid: 2604880, reviewer: 'Hayleekins'}
19th October 2011:
Haha that was very cute, and quite funny :) There were only some parts of the story that didn't make a whole lot of sense (After midnight her cart was a cauldron again, so she apparated home... but earlier it said she was a muggleborn so she couldn't... THEN AGAIN now I think about it, even if she was a muggleborn, she was still a witch, so she could have simply apparated in the first place? ... I DUNNO, just never mind)
It was a very entertaining story, and is assisting me with procrastinating, so I thank you :)
Nice work and Happy Writing,
Hayleekins
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{reviewid: 2345779, reviewer: 'Floop'}
11th May 2010:
LOL. Sirius="Oh. How are babies made?" LoL!! I would have loved to know a kid Sirius.
Author's Response: Wouldn't we all :)
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{reviewid: 2332279, reviewer: 'LexieLuminescent'}
14th April 2010:
Awww! I looove this story! Ten out of ten, of course! (:
-Lexie
Author's Response: Why thank you!
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{reviewid: 2316924, reviewer: 'Natalya'}
19th March 2010:
i luv ur version of siruis' 5 year old mind i also found ur version of kreachers ending of cinderella
Author's Response: Thank you :))
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{reviewid: 2167608, reviewer: 'God%20Save%20The%20People'}
19th July 2009:
“Who was she? Was she a spy?”
Aww he's so cute!
The ending was so funny/sweet at the same time:
"and I went to go tell Regulus the story. Only, I didn’t tell him the story with dumb old Kreacher’s end. I told him with MY very own ending. ‘Cause I just like that one better. And then I told him those new words."
PS 10/10
Author's Response: Thank you so much :D
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{reviewid: 2167575, reviewer: 'Melody_07'}
19th July 2009:
“Once upon a time, there was a mudblood named Cinderella.”
LOL love it!
Author's Response: Thank you :D
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{reviewid: 1991424, reviewer: 'posers_sux'}
19th November 2008:
Aw that was cute! I've never read a story like that before, but I really did like it. Little Sirius was so cute x3!
I liked his ending better, too ;).
ps;; It's shook, not shaked - unless that was intentional since Sirius is five hah.
Author's Response: Haha yeah. Sirius' grammar is not quite developed yet. Thanks for reading!
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{reviewid: 1777221, reviewer: 'stepnhunguyen'}
3rd January 2008:
Um WOW!I like it when it's Siriu's turn to talk
Author's Response: Thank you :)
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{reviewid: 1711250, reviewer: 'Atropa%20belladonna'}
14th November 2007:
Ooh! This is really very entertaining! "How are babies made?" I nearly died laughing.
10/10
-Atropa
Author's Response: Thank you :D
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{reviewid: 1694887, reviewer: 'lollipop_marauderette'}
2nd November 2007:
ko now THAT wuz funny! i almost peed myself !bravissimo.nice name!
FUN N KISSES
Author's Response: Thank yooouuu :D
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{reviewid: 1660068, reviewer: 'ForgottenMarauder'}
7th October 2007:
I absolutely loved this! Sirius was adorable and the demented Kreacher story was hilarious. This goes directly to my favorites.
Author's Response: Yaaay thanks!
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{reviewid: 1645251, reviewer: 'celiacprincess'}
26th September 2007:
Nice. Really. I like it how even at a young age, Sirius doesn't think like his family expects him to. :D
Author's Response: Mhmm. Gotta love him :)
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{reviewid: 1607324, reviewer: 'marauder017'}
31st August 2007:
haha..really funny!loved it a lot!
-lei
Author's Response: Thank you muchly :)
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{reviewid: 1596369, reviewer: 'joojoo'}
25th August 2007:
Rofl. Wow. Such random genius. And Sirius is just too adorable.
If that's possible.
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{reviewid: 1552176, reviewer: 'HPsmartone32'}
3rd August 2007:
HAHA! that was GREAT! i loved it. hilarious and just awesome. great job. i love little sirius! =]
Author's Response: He's a cutie isn't he? Thanks for the review :)
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{reviewid: 1541598, reviewer: 'StarryNight'}
29th July 2007:
haha, that's really funny. Kreacher's version of Cinderella is... interesting, but it's Sirius's comments that really crack me up. good work.
Author's Response: Thank you so much!
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{reviewid: 1535843, reviewer: 'StoryWizard'}
27th July 2007:
Funny, nice story. I might use that Sirius/Dog idea, it was funny. Again, nice story, kinda funny.
Author's Response: Thanks! Use away!
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{reviewid: 1525933, reviewer: 'thegoldensnitch'}
20th July 2007:
hehe really funny!
x-x-x
Author's Response: Thanks!
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{reviewid: 1446237, reviewer: 'jackywacky'}
3rd June 2007:
blood brilliant!
Author's Response: Thank you :)
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{reviewid: 1329083, reviewer: 'Vatina'}
4th March 2007:
That was really funny!
Author's Response: Thank you very much!
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{reviewid: 1312770, reviewer: 'canismajorfan'}
19th February 2007:
poor, demented, kreacher...not that i feel soory for him.
I wonder how he would retell Hansel and Gretel? "And the the witch ate the dirty little children" "why?" "Because they were muggles!" "so?" "So they were filth! poor, poor kreacher, Kreacher has to obey master, but he dosn't want to, oh, no, he does not, master is stupid." Great story! you have a talent for causing severe cases of laughing.^/^ *
Author's Response: Heh. Thanks. I'm glad you think so. And I do agree. Thank would be quite an interesting version of Hansel and Gretel, lol. Thanks for reviewing!
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{reviewid: 1297611, reviewer: 'feisty_red_head'}
7th February 2007:
haha haha ha
hehe hoho
*out of breath
Author's Response: Yay! Thanks :)
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{reviewid: 1256919, reviewer: 'fredfanlol'}
7th January 2007:
sirius is such a sweet child, teaching his brother new things every day...
Author's Response: Haha, yes. I'm sure Regulus greatly benefitted from his teachings. :) Thanks for the review!
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{reviewid: 1243973, reviewer: 'Nymphie%20Lupin'}
28th December 2006:
HILARIOUS!!! This is great! Oh, if only words could explain the pure greatness of this fic. I'll try. CREATIVE, WONDERFUL, FANTASTIC, BRILLIANT, GENIUS, SPECTACULAR, SPLENDID, FABULOUS, OUTSTANDIN, GOING ON MY FAVES RIGHT NOW! 10/10 I love this fairytale! Sirius was a cute five year old in this one. Acting like a dog, THAT IS SO HIM!!! To think in about ten years he's going to actually grow a tail and fur! LMAO!!! THIS WAS GENIUS!!!
-Nymphie
Author's Response: Aw, thanks so much! This review made me smile. :)
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{reviewid: 1213667, reviewer: 'sugarquillgirl90'}
1st December 2006:
This is one of the cutest and funniest stories I have read! I love how you tell the story from Sirius' point of view, and I especially enjoyed how you showed Kreacher's personality. The ending was hilarous. Great job. 8/10
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad that you liked how I portrayed Kreacher. And thanks for the 8/10! :D
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