That was really good. the description was great and everything. Great job, i loved it.

Author's Response: Thanks very much!

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amazing , i love you writing style , u would have to be my fav author right now.keep up the fantastic work.hope the rest of the story can live up to this chapter.

p.s. i am really glad to see an author who has a story on neville , he is so rarely seen here.i really like him.

Author's Response: Wow! Thanks very much! I hope the next one lives up to this one too. We'll see. Thanks for reviewing!

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cool start, intresting. I can't wait to find out more.
delfy x

Author's Response: Thanks!! Wow.. a new review! Thank you very much for stopping by. Believe it or not, I am working on this so hopefully I can get back to posting on this one. :) I'm so giddy right now... *goes off to do the happy dance*

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Wow, that is really good. I like this one, I'll be waiting for updates.
9.9/10.

Author's Response: WhooHoo! Thanks! I'll try to do the first chapter justice with the update I'm working on.

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gasp! finish! do, do, do!!!

Author's Response: Thanks, daisyCHIC :) I will soon. I'm writing it now.

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woah, dis is kinda like a scene from da village, cept much scarier

Author's Response: Thanks :)

Author's Response: For those who read these Author Responses (because I HATE refreshing the story without a true update and I refuse to review myself, sorry, eVille, I'm using your review to do this :) ) and was wondering what happened to this story: I just wanted to give a little update, or to defend of my lack of updates. Which ever way you want to take it. I AM working on this story. I haven't abandoned it but I've got a huge block on it and I can't seem to get past this one spot that's really... well, it's just bad writing. So HOPEFULLY soon I can get past whatever it is that's blocking the way and I'll get an update in. Thanks to everybody! :D

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Um, not as intrigueing as your other unfinished ones...I am still curious, but I can't figure out where they are and am a bit frustrated...great writing though! I am a big fan! Keep it up!

Author's Response: Thanks! I love your reviews! You're supposed to be confused and not know where they are. It's night time, she's lost her glasses, in a panic, and she forgets where she is.. It's from her POV so you're not going to see vivid details that tell you exactly what's happening. But basically I can tell you without getting into too much detail that they're in a small grove of trees at night time and there's a big garden wall that has a gate that she's trying to find. It'll be clearer later, but for now, clarity is not the story or the character. Thanks so much for reading!

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LUUUUVED IT!!

Author's Response: THANKS!! lol!

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o wow, very dark.... great chapter....

Author's Response: Thanks :D Working on the second chapter but it's being difficult right now so it's taking a bit longer than I like. Sorry.

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... Wow. This is great, I can't wait to read more. My curiosity has been aroused!

Author's Response: Great! Thanks bunches!

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Whats this? Something interesting? Thats now driving me insane to know what happens next? By golly, Nevillefan, you've got yourself an awesome openin' chapter!

Author's Response: *takes a lavish bow* Thank you! It took me a while to get it just right... but goodness it's a good one. Working hard on the second chapter...should be presentable soon :)

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wow, and instent addition to my favorites, keep it up. Update soon. Don't be discourged from the lack of reviews.

Author's Response: Thanks :) Don't worry, I won't.

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bom bom baaa! eagerly await more...

Author's Response: Thanks!

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i can't wait for the next chapter this is going great!

Author's Response: Thanks! So nice of you to say :)

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Whoa, this looks good! Captivating! O.O Do write more!

Author's Response: Great! Thanks! Working on the next chapter now, actually :)

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hey cool! reminds me of Brother's Grim!! :D update soon... adding to faves!

Author's Response: Thanks :D Never thought of Brothers Grimm before. I started writing this LONG time ago and finally got the courage to try to put it up! Thanks for reading!

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