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Review #1, by DarkHeart Eighteen Funerals and a Wedding

6th May 2007:
I have to say that i think you did a great job writing this story. I realy enjoyed reading it. I know that you didn't realy stick to the origional harry potter cannon but i find that that is what made this story so good. it gets annoying trying to read the same story over and over. I'm glad that this one was origional. keep up the good work.

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Review #2, by dorset888 Eighteen Funerals and a Wedding

20th August 2006:
It doesn't really explain callista's background much. It is a great story though, with a happy ending. :)

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Review #3, by dorset888 Eighteen Funerals and a Wedding

20th August 2006:
It doesn't really explain callista's background much. It is a great story though, with a happy ending. :)

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Review #4, by Sissalie Eighteen Funerals and a Wedding

2nd January 2006:
this was almost heartbreaking it was so sweet! It's your not-so-common-love-story that takes your breath away. You did a great job writing and dousing it in turmoil, love and character. I hope you go on to do many other works, getting better and better as you go. Good luck, -Siss:)

Author's Response: Thanks for the feedback. Been thinking of another HP story based on the six books on the same sort of theme (i.e. the final destruction of Voldemort). Will have a look for some of your fan fiction if you've written any. Thanks again

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Review #5, by Wiccan Eighteen Funerals and a Wedding

28th November 2005:
It might not be a bad idea to go back and edit the spacing. It really is hard to read without double spaces between paragraphs, and it may scare off some readers. I liked the story. I would put it into the AU (alternative universe)category since quite a bit of it doesn't fit canon, especially after HBP. I really enjoyed the more original parts of your writing, especially the Harpy. That is one I never heard before. Never, will I forget the laundry...that was so original and visual...a true delight! I will always remember the shirts scrubbing their armpits! I also liked the fact that there were 'twists' at the end that weren't expected. All in all, a really enjoyable read. Thank you for the entertainment. A really nice afternoon whiled away with a good 'book'.

Author's Response: Thanks for the comments. I'm afraid I don't get much opportunity to go online but next time I do I'll space out my chapters more. Really glad you enjoyed it. Have you written if so I would love to read it.

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Review #6, by Wiccan Confessions and Signs

27th November 2005:
This is pretty darn good so far I'm interested to know where you go with this after the 'set-up' is done. I especially loved the wonderful magical imagination you displayed with the laundry. It would be a HUGE help if you would give double spacing between paragraphs and lines of dialog. Just a big blob of words is difficult to read.

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