One of the best one shots I've ever read. Seriously! I really liked it! 10/10. Report Review
awww. love james in this story. the way you portray him is amazing! 10/10 going on the favvies Report Review
You know, I think that this should be more than just a one-shot. It's really REALLY good. I know it was probably intended as a one-shot and you're probably not going to change it, but it would be really good as more. And you know that you'll have me (and I'm sure many many more) loyal readers :] I guess it's just something to think about. I really liked it a lot!!
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Um just a question...i know that James Potter was said to be a chaser in the books but can u give me a page reference in the books that says that coz honestly its been so long since i read Harry Potter and the Philospher's stone and i'm confused now...was he a chaser or seeker? if he was a seeker why would JKR have him playing with a snitch? I mean he's obviously talented like Harry so does Harry not take after James for his talent and Quidditch position? HELP! I'm confused! must read the book again for the 7th time! i'm getting a lil rusty! oops! well anywayz the story is top notch well done! 10/10 and so goin in my faves! i like the way u write ur very talented! i'm also reading ur other fic "meant to be" and have to say its also very enjoyable! go u!!! luv wired2damoonXxX:o)Author's Response: thanks for the review. :) It never says in the books that James was a chaser -- that bit of information came from JK Rowling herself in an interview (I believe, if you look up 'James Potter' on the hp lexicon it will give a link to said interview). In the first movie, Hermione shows Harry a plaque in the trophy room that says "James Potter -- seeker." I chose to make James a chaser because I like the idea of Harry being different from his father, and also, I accept JK Rowling's word as cannon more than the movies. (It might be noted that that scene in the movie was never included in the books.) As for the snitch, a snitch is more fun to show off with than a quaffle, isn't it? Plus, look at Ginny. She's both an apt seeker and chaser. I don't see why James couldn't be both. :)
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I'm with the Drunk Elves... cute n fluffy. :) a good little fluff is needed every now and then, after all. good job. Report Review
awww such a cute story! i love everything you write, you capture lily and james perfectly. i loved the last lines too, so sweet! i think i'll go add you to my favourite authors list now.
~maddy~ Report Review
Aw, I read this at Mugglenet some time ago. It is very sweet. And the last line is just awesome. Report Review
Awww! That was sooooooo cute! He would give up Quidditch just to be with her? I thought that was so cute! You are a great author, keep up the great work! Report Review
I know I said in my last review I was going to sleep, but I lied! Instead I have been wandering the house aimlessly, and now I find myself once again reading what you have to offer. Another brilliant oneshot. In fact, I think I might have read it before (not sure if I have already reviewed, but stilll...) I really love the narration, especially Lily's constant corrections of said narration (James Potter is NOT handsome!) The dialogue is great and I love how easygoing James is. Lily is perfect- I love stories in which she accidentally starts to like him. Oops. The end is really nice as well. I guess the only thing left of yours for me to read is the long fic, and that one'll surely have to wait until another day. Thanks for contributing to my insomnia! Goodnight for real this time, NepheleAuthor's Response: Hehe, thanks so much! I'm so glad you liked it. :) I love stories like that too, and have a lot of fun writing them. x) Ah, insomnia, how well I know thee. That was, at least, until this year where sleep was such a rare thing that I jumped at any opportunity to seize it. Hahaa. Thanks for reviewing. <3 Report Review
Oh, that was cute! Especially the end. Maybe she is the Seeker material:) Honestly, she tries to fool herself so hard!!! I ask you, who would not be crazy about James Potter??? Anyways, keep up the good work. Btw, I was wondering whether you have thought about writing about other couples or other genre entirely?!Author's Response: Thank you for the review. :) To answer your question, other couples don't really interest me that much. If there were other cannon couples to write in marauder time, I'd jump at it, hehe. But I'm not interested in writing Sirius/OC or something like that, and we haven't really been introduced to many other characters from that time. I have attempted some Harry/Ginny, but it just didn't hold my interest long enough for it to go anywhere. I might branch out sometime and write a Remus/Tonks fic (because I love Remus, hehe), but it probably won't be anytime soon. I have so many James/Lily stories I want to write, haha! Thanks for the review again.
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You are an excellent writer! I looked up your other stories after Dear Lily. I was almost sad as the story ended because it's a cliff hanger...and then I read the last sentence, and the rest of the story fell into place without being stated. The meaning of those last sentences, especially the very last phrase, renewed a hope in my heart. It says everything. Please continue to share your extraordinary talent. Author's Response: Thank you so much for the lovely review, Jessica. :) It means so much to me, and I'm so glad you liked it. <3 Report Review
hmm, interesting to say the leastAuthor's Response: well thank you. :) Report Review
cute!! this is a great one - shot, but i really think you should write another chapter, just 2 make it a bit more completeAuthor's Response: Thank you! I'm so glad you like it. I don't think I'm going to make it any longer though; I rather like it as a one-shot and I have no clue what I would extend it to. Thanks for the support though, it means the world to me! :) Report Review
I really like it. This story is really different, however, to your story Dear Lily. Please update!Author's Response: Hehe, thanks! An update is in queue! Whoo! Report Review
Oh oh, you have to make this into a story...
Author's Response: Thanks. :) For now it'll probably just be a one-shot. Thanks for the support though, love! <3 Report Review
Ah! I loved it! It's cute how Lily blushes about her 'sensitivity about her height' lol! Adorable one-shot! :)Author's Response: Thanks so much :) Report Review
definitely something to think about! and good other stories too: i read it on mugglenet.
btw, about the banner for this story: WOW. Did you make it? if you did, then just "something to think about": pretty please, could you make one for either of my stories? if you can't, i understand! Author's Response: Thanks for the review, love! Yes, I made the banner. :) I don't currently have the time, but as soon as I find time I'll try and make you one. :) Report Review
definitely something to think about! and good other stories too: i read it on mugglenet.
btw, about the banner for this story: WOW. Did you make it? if you did, then just "something to think about": pretty please, could you make one for either of my stories? if you can't, i understand! Author's Response: Thanks for the review. :) Report Review
Marvelous! I loved it, it was seriously well written, and seriously enjoyable. By the way, I loved how James was tryign to get her on the Quidditch team, it adds an interesting idea to the relationship, perhaps Lily played quidditch, just becase she was a prefect doesn't mean that she didn't play quidditch, and enjoy it. Well, anyway, loved it, and thanks. Keep up the marvelous writting.Author's Response: Thanks so much Ran. :) Report Review
Haha. That ending was cutee <33Author's Response: Thank you sweetie. :) Report Review
awsome. james sound so cute. lol!Author's Response: Thank you :):) Report Review
ah very cool. Nice story!Author's Response: Thank you, love. :) Report Review
Winky: oh that is the cooliest!
Dobby: Bit fluffy, but this is one of the greatest one-shots we have read this year!
Winky: Please keep writing,and we is checking if you is writing any other stories we can review!
Dobby: This rocks our socks!Author's Response: Thank you so much! This review made me very smiley, hehe. :):):) Report Review
this is a really good story! i find it so weird to come across something so good with so little reviews. so hear i go, adding my two cents worth to tell you it was awesome. i really liked the banter between them, especially when james brought up the fact that she must have been staring at him to have noticed his so called annoying habits. seemed very true to canon and overall great! go you!Author's Response: Thank you so much, you make me feel so very happy. ^__^ I'm glad you like it, I do find that writing dialogue and 'banter' (great word, I love that word, haha!) between those two is much fun. Thanks so much for the wonderful review. Love! Report Review
Great ending!! I loved it!Author's Response: Thank you so much! :) Report Review
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