{reviewid: 1864297, reviewer: 'ME%21'}
15th March 2008:
So so good!!! Really cute!
Author's Response: glad you liked it! :)
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{reviewid: 1656999, reviewer: 'noraxslytherin'}
6th October 2007:
LOL! ohman, this was HILARIOUS. i'd honestly leave a longer review, but its getting very late and my head hurts, so...sorry.
anyway, i really liked everything about this! except, i thought Dobby was the Malfoy's House elf? like he was attached to their house? idk...
ok, i absolutly LOVED how you sticked to canon!!! usually, people make Bellatrix like a year old than Narcissa and Andromeda being the youngest and it makes me so mad!! im very happy that you did your research before you posted this awesome fic.
plus, your dialouge was very funny! and when he turned her dolls outfit into his i was laughing so hard. that last line is so funny! hahaha!! i love this!
again, im sorry for the short review, but if i were to praise this, i'd be up all night. your writing rocks, no grammar mistakes, no spelling mistakes...this is PERFECT. excellent! adding to my faves deffinitly!
-nora.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I'm glad you liked it and thought it was funny. About Dobby - you're right of course, he does belong to the Malfoys during the HP books, but we don't know if he was Lucius or Narcissa's elf originally. I just went with the idea that he originally belonged to Narcissa and went with her when she married Lucius. Thanks again for the review!
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{reviewid: 1379390, reviewer: 'GloGirl3223'}
15th April 2007:
Brilliant, I loved the fact she acted a lot like a brat and then he was a prat. haha. I loved it.
Glo
Author's Response: Thanks, glad you liked it!
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{reviewid: 1365401, reviewer: 'AndrinaBlack'}
5th April 2007:
I loved this! Narcissa was so prim and 'ladylike' that I had to smile the whole time. I actually thought during most of the story that it would be Malfoy in the end, but it was more original than that. I felt so sorry for Narcissa in the end.
I have to say that I really like the originality of the ideas of maybe all of your stories. Nothing is with a very common theme.
Author's Response: Thanks, Annina! I'm glad you liked it, and find my stories original. It means a lot coming from you, since you have such original ideas yourself!
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{reviewid: 1325827, reviewer: 'G'}
1st March 2007:
Hahahahhaa. Litttle Sirius.
Author's Response: thanks! =)
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{reviewid: 1172572, reviewer: 'dim%20at%20best%20%28not%20logged%20in%29'}
22nd October 2006:
Oh, that was brilliant! I actually found myself detesting Sirius in this fic, simply because you wrote the persepctive of the young Narcissa so well. Empathy came easily.
I really loved the idea of her finding Bellatrix uglier than Andromeda, and how their robes and makeup choices reflected who they were. That was a great move on yor part.
Your characterization of Narcissa remained consistant throughout, you had no flaws in that area. She was both snobby and everything a little girl should be... it was brilliant.
I also found the idea of Sirius being her first dance highly original, and now that I think about it, quite logical as well.
Really great one shot!
-Terri
Author's Response: thanks for the great review, Terri! It's funny to take a count of how many reviewers side with each character in this fic, lol... anyway thanks for taking time to comment on all the specifics too, it's nice to know which parts you liked. =)
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{reviewid: 1133022, reviewer: 'SwallowedinDreams'}
10th September 2006:
I love the way you write and I absolutely adore this story!! :0)
Author's Response: thanks so much!!!
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{reviewid: 1128340, reviewer: 'angelchaser13'}
5th September 2006:
How dare Sirius?! Although Narcissa (in my opinion) is a spoiled witch-let (my own word for "young witch"). Very good.
Author's Response: thanks!
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{reviewid: 1101099, reviewer: 'tjwhermione'}
12th August 2006:
OMG! That was incredible! I loved it! I'm totally putting this into My Favorites and I give you a 10/10!
Author's Response: thanks so much!!!
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{reviewid: 1094276, reviewer: 'Meggie'}
6th August 2006:
I really liked that. Sirius was just as much trouble when he was younger.
Author's Response: thanks!!!
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{reviewid: 1092563, reviewer: 'shadows_glance'}
5th August 2006:
Hehe, that was a VERY shocking ending if I do say so myself. I expected something much different. But, much better than saying it was Lucius Malfoy... that would have been too obvious.
Author's Response: thanks for reviewing, glad the ending surprised you! =)
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{reviewid: 1092496, reviewer: 'XXXdieXXXromanticXXX'}
5th August 2006:
That was so unexpected. I love Sirius. I'll bring him back to life. I swear.
Author's Response: lol, thanks for the great review!
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{reviewid: 1089851, reviewer: 'Dark%20Angel'}
3rd August 2006:
Great story. I loved it!
Author's Response: thanks!
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{reviewid: 1082246, reviewer: 'Misty_Rey'}
29th July 2006:
Hahahah!!!! Hilarious!!! Poor dear Narcissa! You wrote the two of them very well, very canon-like! Good job!
Author's Response: thanks! glad you thought it was realistic. =)
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{reviewid: 1079171, reviewer: 'Faye%20the%20Belle'}
27th July 2006:
I loved it! very cute
Author's Response: thanks! =)
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{reviewid: 1069976, reviewer: 'ilovecandy62'}
20th July 2006:
lmao! Poor Narcissa! I actually felt bad for her. It was so cute!
Author's Response: thanks for the review! i'm glad you liked it. =)
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{reviewid: 1053389, reviewer: 'Amberflames1'}
7th July 2006:
That was Sirius? Hmm... strange. But interesting!
Author's Response: Yes, it was Sirius. =) Thanks for leaving a review... I hope you enjoyed the story (I couldn't really tell from your review).
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{reviewid: 1050510, reviewer: 'Hermione%20Fan'}
5th July 2006:
Oh dear. Poor Narcissa. Great story. :-)
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I'm glad you liked it. =)
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{reviewid: 1044351, reviewer: 'lollypop_kid101'}
30th June 2006:
Cute.10!
Author's Response: thanks. =)
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{reviewid: 1042609, reviewer: 'micketro'}
29th June 2006:
yea go surius!!!!
Author's Response: =)
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{reviewid: 1034336, reviewer: 'Kerryanah%20Black'}
23rd June 2006:
lol poor cissa, hmmm i was kind of hoping she would meet Lucius but it's still cute. wonderfully mature with a touch of child-playing-dress-up that gives you a insight into narcissa's character
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I'm glad you liked it. And I do have a new one-shot coming out that may satisfy your desire for a romance fic. ;)
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{reviewid: 1019422, reviewer: 'xolilkelox'}
11th June 2006:
good story i never read a story based on Narcissa i though the boy was going to be Mr. Malfoy ( i can never remember how you spell his name lol ) but then you said he had dark hair. any way good story.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I'm glad you liked this. I hope you find many more Narcissa stories - she's such a great character to work with. =)
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{reviewid: 969268, reviewer: 'Unicorn%20Girl'}
25th April 2006:
lolololololllll!!!!!!!! cool story!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I'm glad you liked it. =)
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{reviewid: 949343, reviewer: 'xx_crystal_tears_xxx'}
23rd March 2006:
this story is really good! i love sirius black as a kid... although i'll admit that for a while i thought he was Lucius... lol
Rina xx
Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review! Glad you liked the surprise ending. =)
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{reviewid: 939826, reviewer: 'ten_oclock'}
16th March 2006:
That's so cool! I was wondering who it was, I thought it was lucius-lol! I was thinking "wow who knew Lucius could behave so improperly!" Lol-love Sirius!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I'm glad you liked the little surprise at the end. =)
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