yeah, like I said before, you do the 'mysterious character in love' thing very well! The only thing I'd reccomend is changing the plot up from time to time rather than the same story. What I liked about this one is the way that you let us into her world before just explaining what happened in the present tense. I felt sorry for her, and I think if you were expecting to extract some emotion from us before telling us who it was then you did a good job. Also, that last paragraph, it made me wonder... does he feel the same way? Will his family not accept that? Still wondering, -Siss:)

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I can soooo relate to Pansy in this story.

Author's Response: I'm glad I made it realistic enough for you to relate, thanks.

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HOW SAD!!!!!!!!!!!!!! How come you always write sad stories??? Just curious. Well, I've written some new stories and chapters, and I value your opinion, so I wanted you to read and review!!

Author's Response: I don't know, I have this thing about happy endings... Real life isn't like that so I don't want it to be unrealistic in that everyone is super happy and everything is wonderful and dandy. I'll try to catch up with your stories soon, my computer just got back up so I have a bunch of other stuff to do too.

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reallly good wheres a next im waiting

Author's Response: Thanks! I actually have a couple of other fics out if you want to check them out.

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one word to say about this story...Perfect! Mouse16

Author's Response: Thank you! You're so nice! =D

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u no that was very clever, unexpected, but clever. pansy is still a twat

Author's Response: Lol... thanks?

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Oh! Ive just realised the significance of the title! Brilliant!!

Author's Response: Lol, thanks! I'm glad you caught that =)

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Its me again! Into the heart and soul of Pansy Parkinson this time. I never EVER thought I could feel sorry for her and here I am feeling complettely sorry for her! The hurt was written again so realistic and just feels so real that it makes you relate to it. Great story. The actions and feeling of Draco&Pansy during and after the kiss were particularly powerful. Awesome!! =)

Author's Response: Thanks again! I'm so glad you liked it, it's nice to know that all my hard work is appreciated! Thank you so much! =)

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