I'm confused with the ages. How old is Sirius? How old is Hermione? It's a really good story. Report Review
Just amazing, wonderful! I can't wait to find out what's next. Report Review
I loved your story and everything. But I am a little confused. If a Julliete made a wish for her mommy to be happy shouldn't have Harry appeared.? Cause it is pretty obvious that she loved him the most... After all she has a child with him... It confuses me why Sirius showed up, but it did make a story lovely... It's just I was confused by that... Btw.. You are an amazing writer.
xoxo. Cathy... Report Review
"You and I?" he whispered reassuringly, the crooked grin that had welcomed him back from the veil so many months ago, sliding across his face, "we’ll make the world jealous."
One of the best quotes that I have ever come across in reading. Report Review
I loved this part.
Broke my heart, but I loved it.
And the ending, about the sorting hat, was perfection! Report Review
I loved this, it's so perfect.
The magic, the reaction, the emotion- all of it is mind-bogglingly perfect. Report Review
"Go to him," Sirius ordered quietly, "before I don’t let you."
Best sentence ever. Report Review
Ah. This chapter has me in giggles every time.
Perfection!!! Report Review
I loved the ending.
Just perfection. Report Review
"I do apologize for being so inconvenient in my struggles with the great beyond,” Sirius mumbled.
"I seem to fail at everything in a quite flamboyant fashion. I’m rather surprised you thought death would be any different."
^^ Perfect quote. Report Review
Tonks managed a tight laugh. “Exactly what did you ask Santa for, little girl?”
^^ Made me laugh so hard! :D Report Review
Again, I love this so much.
It's so cute and it's not a terribly long story so it's a comfortable, quick but not too quick, read! Report Review
So I love this story, it's nearly the 4th time I'm rereading it.
I've always been a fan of the cliche Hermione/Draco love stories, and love triangles are always better (and Hermione/Sirius stories are so rare and never written good if you do find them- I love this one!)!
Anyways, I've decided I'm going to review each chapter and what not, because I have the time and the love for the story.
I love how you explained what happened without having too long paragraphs that are just loaded with information and get boring, and I love how you just jump in to the story with the Santa Clause thing- it's amazing! Report Review
): I don't like in chapter 11 how hermione is weak and doesn't stand up for herself (or draco in 10) I suppose thats the feminist in me D: But all up a great story so far :P Report Review
Wow this story was so powerful!!! I loved it! Didn't think I'd like Sirius and Hermione together but I really do now! Well done! Report Review
while i dont like that harry, ron n ginny died, this is one of the best stories I've read :) Report Review
riddles weren't pureblood tom riddle senior was a muggle his mother a witch Report Review
ah juliette harrys illegitimate child! the plot thickens! loving the story! Report Review
I read this entire story today, and I have to say that it became far more than I expected going into it. The premise sounded so farfetched, but I decided to give it a try, and it was quite worth it. I'm not sure that Hermione was quite Hermione as I am used to her, but then, this imagined future is darker than canon, so perhaps it makes sense. There were still some things I wasn't sure about - her affairs just seem so unlike her Gryffindor self, but you carried it off fairly well.
Juliette was engaging, and I am certainly a big fan of Sirius (how could you not be?). I would have liked to have seen the characters a little more. The balancing act between plot and characterization can be tricky. You did well, of course. My personal preference would just be to get to know them a little better. However, it stands fine as it is. I sometimes also felt a little lost at some points where exposition was missing - for example, skipping important things like Lucius being captured - but again, it worked overall. After all, the story mostly centered on Sirius, Hermione, and Draco. In the end, I almost felt like one of the most important things was Draco's redemption...
Regardless. AMAZING. Thank you so much for sharing this beautiful work. Cheers! Report Review
WOW! SERIOUSLY, WOW! THIS IS ONE OF THE BEST STORIES I HAVE EVER READ AND ONW OF THE MOST CREATIVE ONES TOO! The pairing is bizarre, yes, but I loved it still!! It's one of a kind! I can't believe that Harry and Ron and Ginny had died but that's what made this story so amazing! I read itso many years ago but I read it again in two days. It's just... wonderfully done! The way you brought Sirius back, I laughed at it first.. But then, when I stopped and thought, wow, it actually made some sense. A great, great story! :D Report Review
I really really like this so far. Good thing it's complete! I can keep reading! Report Review
GREAT STORY! You are brilliant! Report Review
BEAUTIFUL! Keep up the *awesome* work! Report Review
Chicken! Hah lol! I wanna learn sirius' secret!,, haha lol Report Review
Oooh mione! Maybe that wasnt sucha great deal! Lol! I love sirius! Report Review
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