AW. I love Draco! Please post! :P Report Review
Update soon! Keaira is so cool!!! UPDATE SOON!Author's Response: *laughs* Keaira is a loser, that's what MAKES her cool, lmao. lol, glad you liked her xD I'm sure she is too, lol Report Review
i luv your story, it think its great i love the charcters and the plot! as 4 spelling mistakes i haven't noticed any but im the worst speller in the world (thank god 4 spell check) :) keep up the good work update soon!Author's Response: I'm a horrible speller too, I've said it before. So glad that you're pleased with the story though xD Report Review
haha! this is my favorite chapter! :D please update soon... :DAuthor's Response: lol, thanks xD will do Report Review
that's a really good story... please write more... for the sake of meAuthor's Response: lol, sure thing darling xD glad you like it Report Review
ooooooh. please update soon i cannot wait to see what happens next! UPDATE! lol. love it by the way.Author's Response: lol, I will, so glad you like it xD Report Review
ooooooOoOoOo.....this story is getting sooo good! please update soon!Author's Response: thanks :) deff will Report Review
oh and my suggestion is to copy your story and paste it on Microsoft Word, it finds all the mistakes for you. Just a helpful hint though!Author's Response: I write my stories in Microsoft Word. Report Review
tgis story is amazing!!! please update soon! i'll be waiting! :DAuthor's Response: lol, as soon as possible I promise :) Report Review
awwwww! lol. I love this story. in the other chapters though their were a few spelling mistakes that made it a little confusing. I dont mean to give you flames or anything but it can sometimes get a little annoying for the reader. But other than that i think you did an amazing job and i am defianately adding you to my favorites. Great job yet again! ~psychokittenAuthor's Response: I know, I try my hardest to get all the spelling mistakes, but sometimes I miss them, there's nothing really I can do, unless I look over them more, which would only make me not get the chapters out as fast. I feel horrrible myself because I too hate spelling mistakes, but I try my best :(
thanks for the reveiw though, I like to hear that you at least like the stories lol Report Review
oOoOoOoOoO.....soooo good....need more.....update soon....pleaseAuthor's Response: definatly will, lol, thanks for the review :) Report Review
wow....great chapter! I'm so glad its out! Yay! I absolutley Love Love Love this story. so great. anyway good job and update as soon as u can!! Happy Christmas!Author's Response: glad you like it, that one took a very long time to be validated, I was getting a little mad, but hey, who can be mad on christmas xD I love you hear that you love my stories :) Have a Harry Christmas, lol xD Report Review
ooohh........ draco caught it? hmm? ergg..... maybe? i hope he did! lol. can't wait for next chapter!
xxRaveAuthor's Response: maybe... xD you'll have to wait for the next one to find out Report Review
Great story. Hope you write more soonAuthor's Response: thanks :) I deff will be Report Review
great chapter update soon! i have a quick question though why didn't you put harry on the quidditch team?Author's Response: alrighty, I had someone ask this before. This story take place in their 6th year. remember that.
now, in their fifth year, Umbridge baned Harry from EVER playing quidditch (go read the book again, I remember her saying that) Of course, that changed, and Harry was captian in the sixth book, but nothing in the sixth book happened in my story. I took those words seriously when I read it, just because she's in the Ministry and could make that happen. So, Harry is baned from playing quidditch for now. It might change later. anyway xD sorry for the confusion. Report Review
EVILLLLLL, YOU ARE ALL ABOUT EVILITYAuthor's Response: who... Me? NO! xD sorry, but I had to, or else the chapter would have been humgously long and you wouldn't have a reason to read the next one xD Report Review
your story is very good...great plot line and amazing wording...i must admit everyday i await a update, but i never await for anything. please post the next chapter soon. byeAuthor's Response: :) thanks so much, lol. Report Review
YOU STORY IS AWSOME!! keep it up! i cant wait to see what they do in the duel.
Author's Response: lol, thanks! xD Report Review
You need to check that you make sense. some parts you tlkin in present n the in same line past i quote: 'I had waiting for about an hour that morning' and then your spelling is inaccurate 'Darco wasn’t truthful a lot so I had my reasons to be spacious.' spacious is to do with space i think you ment 'suspicious' proof read it
Author's Response: That line should have been 'I've had *been* waiting.' so no, there is no change in tenses, but thank you for pointing that out.
Darco, of course, should have been Draco, but that was a mere typing mistake, just like I tend to put 'teh' a lot instead of 'the'.
I am a horrible speller, and I can admit that because I know I suck, so I rely on spell cheak mostly. Also, I do get at least three other people to edit my chapters, but some things slip. Everyone makes mistakes, and I'm sorry if it bothers you, but nothing can really be done.
Although I thought I would point out, with as much respect as possible, that you too make mistakes. This reveiw has a few spelling errors aswell. Using you as an example, everyone makes mistakes. :(Author's Response: again I make a mistake. 'I had *been* waiting'.
I hope I'm not offending you.
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oooo.... good chapter! hope you update again soon!
xxRaveAuthor's Response: thanks I will :) Report Review
omg that was a VERY good story, i can't wait to read more of it... or more of i can't wait untill you write more of it.Author's Response: thanks :) the next chapter will me up soon Report Review
hurry upAuthor's Response: um.... no. lol. the next will be up soon, be patient Report Review
excelent chapy! update asap or i think i will die!Author's Response: aw! don't die!! xD i have a project due on monday, but after that, I'll be sure to put the next one up :) Report Review
so they're in 7th year?Author's Response: no, sixth. That's why the things that happened in HBP didn't happen. I started this story before the sixth book came out, so that's why. Report Review
okay, so what happens next. please review, it is really good at the moment, hell, you had me stay up till 2am reading it, because i didn't want to stop... please update. thanks for being an amazing writer. :)Author's Response: aww!!! THANKS!! xD
but I can't tell you what happenes next... :3, you'll just have to wait. Report Review
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