Eh? A unique approach and idea. The proof reading needs a tweak here and there. The story could have been longer to develop the plot more. It is too radical a departure from canon to be handled well with such a short word count. However, your talent and abilities are obvious, and the potential of the story is high. Keep going. Just because you have a unique idea doesn´t mean it is valueless.Author's Response: thanks, i know what you mean, something that i kind of just threw together. perhaps i will go back and revise it in the near future. thanks for the review! Report Review
Wow, it made me tear tear and tear. I usually dont but it just made me sick...but in the good way you know when your so sad, well anyway I loved it!!! I really did.Author's Response: Thanks! I'm really glad that you liked it! Report Review
love it! good work! youre a real good writer. i'm sure that you'll be famous one b/c of itAuthor's Response: Thanks Eva! That means a lot to me! Report Review
wow unexpected... good writing, be sure to write even more to fine tune it ^^Author's Response: Thanks! I like writing unexpected endings ... I will most definitely go through it in the future and fine tune it! Thanks for the review! Report Review
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