i didn't really understand it very much. is her mother actually dying, or is she depressed and dying in that way? and why did ginny give her the money if she didn't trust her?Author's Response: That's alright. I think her mum is just depressed and dying in that way. She's not actually, like, dying. Ginny gave her money because... well... wouldn't you?
Yeah, I wrote this a long time ago... Report Review
Lindsay Lohan's song confessions of a broken heart is really good. lovely good great job!!!Author's Response: Yeah, I like it too. Thank you so much! Report Review
this story is cute. and im guessin lanie is dakota fanning. i like her. shes pretty.Author's Response: Yeah, she is.
Dakota Fanning is so adorable! She's a very pretty girl. She's so adorable, though. Report Review
10/10 once uh-gainAuthor's Response: Yeah... it is.
Thankies! Report Review
Okay, first off, love the song, and second, love the fic! Sounds so real for someone who's never had it happen to them, can't say the same...
I love it, going in my faves and rating a ten! Keep up the fab work, you're really good!!!Author's Response: Aww. I'm sorry. Well, I'm writing an original fic where the main character's family is divorced, so I try to at least make it sound real.
Thank you very much! And thanks for taking the time to review, also! Report Review
OMG i dont know how long ago this was writen but its great so sad though i started crying to and my parents are still together. fantactic story Author's Response: It was written over a year ago--gosh, that's scary. It was posted on November 1, 2005. Wow. That's a long time ago. But thank you. -hands a box of tissues- Thank you! Report Review
I love this story. It nearly brought tears to my eyes. You are a really good writer. Are you going to write a sequel? If you are I can't wait to read it. Their are not many stories like this on Harry potter fanfiction. That are based on thing that could happen.Author's Response: Oh, I haven't really considered it lately. I'll have to think about it a little bit more, and maybe I will write a sequel. Thank you so much for reviewing though! It was a very nice review! Report Review
i have to say that i really like this story and this song. my parents aren't divorced either but that'd been they were ever married. it did bring me close to tears though because i know many girls who have been through similar events in their lives. 10/10Author's Response: Thank you! I sorry for your friends. I have friends whose parents are divorced too. But they're very nice people! Report Review
blimey... thats really sad!! Sequel?Author's Response: I dunno about a sequel. But now that you've mentioned it...maybe. Thank you for reviewing! Report Review
That was such a sweet story, it was really emotional too!Author's Response: Thanks so much! Report Review
Omg, this was so sad... I have the song and was listening to it when I was reading it. I cry everytime I listen to it anyway because my parents divorced, but this time I cried really hard... I love it, it's going on my favorites. Good job :)Author's Response: Yeah, the song is really sad too. I think, not only the words, but the beat, and tune of the song is sad too. I'm sorry your parents are divorced, but I hope all is well. Thank you for taking the time to review, and I wish you luck with everything. Report Review
That is so sad and sweet....I cried I really did....It was great.
Author's Response: Thanks a bunch, really. Report Review
Its happened to me, but I got over it around the time I turned seven or eight, but it was still hard for me to consider my step dad a real dad until just recently, and though I do hear from my real dad, I just want him to leave me and my new family alone. Great story though.Author's Response: Aww, that's horrible, and really sad. I'm so sorry to hear that. I'm happy that you now consider your stepdad a dad now. That's great. Thank you so much for reviewing. Report Review
i love your new banner!!!Author's Response: Mare made it! I still have to credit her, so I will right now, but she made it! Isn't it amazing? Report Review
OMG!!!! this has to be the most saddest thing I've ever read! Maybe it's because I'm a fan of Lindsay also...good jobAuthor's Response: Really? I like Lindsay Lohan, except a few of her songs. Like, all my friends hate her except me. Oh well. Thankies! Report Review
ok...weeeellll thats not exactally what happens but i like the thought. it's sad and true that life totally sucks after divorce and that you never have a whole life again. when going back and forth between parents. but i MUST say i have more friends because of it. i mean with all the moving not out of pity. anyway i think this is a sad but somewhat true story of what would happen...yeah bibi nowAuthor's Response: Yeah, since I don't know exactly what happens, I really had to guess, and base my information on what my friends have had lives like. But yeah, it really does seem like it sucks. Thank you for reviewing, and thanks for telling me what you think. Report Review
wow..that was so sad. write a sequel please. i want to know what happens to lanie. its so heartbreaking! what made draco that way?Author's Response: You want a sequel? That's so cool! Maybe I will then. And if I do, I'll answer your questions. I just gotta finish up my other fanfictions' chapters, then I'll start, I think. Thanks! Report Review
This song seriously kills me... I can't help thinking about my own father while reading this, some parts feels like they're written for me... but hey, on to your story, I think it was well written and I really liked it. I feel so bad for Lanie though... :( Good jobAuthor's Response: Aww...I hope you're okay. I absolutely love the song, and although I have never had anything like that happen to me, I can feel the pain coming from the words. Thank you a bunch for reviewing though, and I hope you're okay. Report Review
In my last review when I said "this is one of the sadest most well written stories I've written" I meant "you've written" Sorry, I good never write stories as well as you!Author's Response: You write very nice fanfictions! Report Review
This was one of the sadest most well written stories I've even written. You are such a brilliant writer and I'm hoping that one day your talent will rub off on me! Luv ya and have a wonderful day! :DAuthor's Response: Thanks, I feel so loved! Report Review
I'm crying too! This is too sad! (sniff) Author's Response: -pats- I'm touched...really. Report Review
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