{reviewid: 1629773, reviewer: 'draehydraxis'}
14th September 2007:
well it was an interesting story i hope you plan to finish it as i hate stories that end in cliff hangers style. also go through and fix you spelling mistakes they make it hard to read.
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{reviewid: 1289965, reviewer: 'Firemnwnb'}
2nd February 2007:
I love it too
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{reviewid: 1288980, reviewer: 'Firemnwnb'}
1st February 2007:
I REALLY LOVE THIS STORY SO PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE UPDATE SOON.
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{reviewid: 979660, reviewer: 'sheila1990'}
7th May 2006:
its great keep going
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{reviewid: 518784, reviewer: 'may'}
28th May 2005:
i like it. update soon plz......... :)
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{reviewid: 518780, reviewer: 'may'}
28th May 2005:
pls don't drop the story. it a great story. plz update soon....
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{reviewid: 432774, reviewer: 'jenni'}
27th March 2005:
ok i dont know why everyone is raving about this it is nothing special! the plot is good though, but there is only so much bad grammar and spelling mistakes i can take, AND it is slightly confusing too!
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{reviewid: 389498, reviewer: 'may'}
24th February 2005:
this is a great story when will the ext chapter will come out???
can't wait ;)
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{reviewid: 386636, reviewer: 'may'}
22nd February 2005:
i like it when the next chater will post?? :)
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{reviewid: 344209, reviewer: 'charmedsky'}
21st January 2005:
i'm a little lost in this ... you should really work on spellling and getting words right, as well as working on your grammar. other than that, i think it's really good! the plots really interesting! keep it up!
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{reviewid: 296136, reviewer: 'jw'}
16th December 2004:
Hermione's a pureblood and didn't know it, I can see it. Snape being related to James as a cousin, probable. Ron getting pissed that Harry and Herm are together, most definately. But never imagined James' brother and sister going into hiding or even having siblings. Very well written. Update soon.
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{reviewid: 177425, reviewer: 'Chloe'}
30th June 2004:
cool
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{reviewid: 177424, reviewer: 'Chloe'}
30th June 2004:
wow, i love it
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{reviewid: 176729, reviewer: 'Tyler'}
29th June 2004:
I LOVE THIS STORY!!! I HOPE YOU ARE NOT FINISHED WITH IT! I AM NOT TRYING 2 BE BOSSY OR ANYTHING, BUT YOU HAVE 2 FINISH IT!!! LOL
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{reviewid: 139323, reviewer: 'Niktia'}
24th April 2004:
Hey. I really like this story. Some of it is confusin gthough. Anyway, I can't wait til the other chapters come out. Hope its soon
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{reviewid: 138761, reviewer: 'harrysgurl'}
23rd April 2004:
OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I absolutely luv ur story!!! itz just like the real books but even more interesting... i think ur a really talented riter, so plz update soon!!! email me with new story lines plz @ sakuranaru810@aol.com
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{reviewid: 136971, reviewer: 'Rhyanna'}
20th April 2004:
I really enjoyed this beginning. The rest I look forward to if the beginning chapters are an indication of what's to come. The only suggestion I have for you is to double check grammar. Other than that -- perfect!! :)
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{reviewid: 136954, reviewer: 'Rhyanna'}
20th April 2004:
I really enjoyed this beginning. The rest I look forward to if the beginning chapters are an indication of what's to come. The only suggestion I have for you is to double check grammar. Other than that -- perfect!! :)
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{reviewid: 97309, reviewer: 'Shortshape'}
21st January 2004:
I love this story! I'm desperate to know what's gonna happen next! Please hurry with more!
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{reviewid: 92552, reviewer: 'someguy'}
6th January 2004:
i love this story but u have me really confused....
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{reviewid: 83692, reviewer: 'Brian%20Mihans'}
4th December 2003:
THIS STORY ROCKS!!!!Its of course not as good as JKR but it is right there next to her! I say that you should team up with JKR and create even more books!!! i know that prolly will never happen but it would be cool if it did. there should be as many Harry Potter books as there are JRR TOLKIEN books!
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{reviewid: 78540, reviewer: 'Dk%20Lili%20%28Lils%29'}
11th November 2003:
Hey! I stopped reading your story like at about chapter 6 because i thought you weren't going to write anymore but then I come back later and there's like four new chapters! I was so happy! I had to go back and read it twice because sometimes it was confusing but I really like it and I hope you update soon!
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{reviewid: 78143, reviewer: 'hpchic'}
9th November 2003:
I'm sorry to say this but you messed up.On Harry and Hermione's schedules you said they would be with Ravenclaw but when they got to the class I noticed it was Slytherin.Once again I'm sorry to tell you this.
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{reviewid: 77850, reviewer: 'alexxi'}
8th November 2003:
O-M-G! PLEASE PLEASE write more this is a really good story!...i no u haven't carried on scince u wrote the 1st 10 chapters...but this soooo good please dont dissapoint all the fans of this story and not carry on...so PLEASE PLEASE keep writing!!!...LUV THE STORY!
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{reviewid: 74169, reviewer: 'Hannah'}
17th October 2003:
Love it please write more
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