{reviewid: 1024864, reviewer: 'PaddySnuffles'}
16th June 2006:
Er - another minor error: In one of the very first chapters, James had already told Harry about how Moony's a werewolf. (Which I really don't think would happen, btw) =)
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{reviewid: 1024855, reviewer: 'PaddySnuffles'}
16th June 2006:
Great story!
1 Thing though: In the 3rd book, Lupin says that "the map never lies", and that's why Wormtail's name didn't change from 'Peter Pettigrew' to 'Scabbers'. So Harry couldn't change his name either then.
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{reviewid: 944618, reviewer: 'Dustin'}
19th March 2006:
Okay.The story was good. You just need to go back and check your spelling.Otherwise its good.So lets hear what they did upstairs.
P.S. its Severus Snape
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{reviewid: 887850, reviewer: 'Callista%20Wolfwood'}
3rd February 2006:
I love your story I added you to my favorites
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{reviewid: 867296, reviewer: 'CCC'}
21st January 2006:
I like it. Your idea was original.
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{reviewid: 834767, reviewer: 'Laura'}
31st December 2005:
No offense, this is really good. But you should check your spelling errors, it'll make the story better.
Author's Response: None taken, i know my pelling ucks, i am going to revise all the chapters soon
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{reviewid: 802269, reviewer: 'Meghan'}
8th December 2005:
it is good but it is hard to read when there are so many spelling mistakes in it.
Author's Response: I am going to revise ALL of my storys over X-mas break
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{reviewid: 777524, reviewer: 'mark'}
20th November 2005:
please write another chapter i cant wieght
Author's Response: i will soon
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{reviewid: 777498, reviewer: 'mark'}
20th November 2005:
they should have had this in the book
Author's Response: Thank you that is so nice
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{reviewid: 777458, reviewer: 'mark'}
20th November 2005:
this is really gd yopu should make more
Author's Response: thank you i will
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{reviewid: 772808, reviewer: 'kandy'}
16th November 2005:
can't wait to see wha thappens when harry meets his gradparents!
Author's Response: yes that will be fun to write
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{reviewid: 772670, reviewer: 'darthvengeful'}
16th November 2005:
Very good again although the spelling is still not that good, it made it a little difficult to read!!
Author's Response: I am sorry, but it is hard with mt computer, cuz it will correct it if it thinks it is wrong with out tellg me
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{reviewid: 772660, reviewer: 'darthvengeful'}
16th November 2005:
Very good, there were one or two big spelling mistakes in this that even I spotted. Great story though
Author's Response: thx i will try harder witht the spelling
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{reviewid: 771847, reviewer: 'kandy'}
16th November 2005:
OMg can not wait until the next chapter to see what is going to happen
Author's Response: the next chapter will be up soon, it is very good if I do say so myself, I just need to spell chaek it, and submit it
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{reviewid: 771444, reviewer: 'kandy'}
15th November 2005:
What! you can not tell me harry potter is getting it on with some girl! that is too goood to be true!
Author's Response: well I fet he should have some fun while he was stuck in the past
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{reviewid: 764551, reviewer: 'pad_foot_80'}
9th November 2005:
this is a great story please right more please please please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: thx i will
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{reviewid: 763887, reviewer: 'kandy'}
9th November 2005:
I think this story is really funny, but it would be so much better at like the end when harry goes back to his time he tells james that he's his son.
Author's Response: I gus u will have to read, and find out if he tells him or not
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{reviewid: 762379, reviewer: 'darthvengeful'}
7th November 2005:
This is a really really good opening to this story and a very good idea and very enjoyable!! I hope you continue with it
Author's Response: thank you and I will
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{reviewid: 762372, reviewer: 'darthvengeful'}
7th November 2005:
This is a really amazing idea!! Very enjoyable and I am still smilinG!
Author's Response: thx
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{reviewid: 762367, reviewer: 'darthvengeful'}
7th November 2005:
Wow this has really made me smile. this is really good!!
Author's Response: thank you, i was smiling when I wrote it
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{reviewid: 762071, reviewer: 'Sweden'}
7th November 2005:
A very twisted story. Keep twistining, I like what I read!
Author's Response: thank you
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{reviewid: 758672, reviewer: 'Drankiint'}
4th November 2005:
you just had to stop here or what? cool anyway
Author's Response: hehehe
the next chapter just needs to be validated
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{reviewid: 758667, reviewer: 'Drankiint'}
4th November 2005:
ofcourse it`s good, something different..
Author's Response: thank you so much
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{reviewid: 758523, reviewer: 'sarah'}
4th November 2005:
I really like this. It's funny how Harry is going to be a maurauder, though I bet that's going to cause some problems in the future. I can't wait for more you better update soon. *sends warning glare* lol
Author's Response: thank you so much I will put the next chapters up soon
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{reviewid: 757965, reviewer: 'kandy'}
3rd November 2005:
ok,this is so good ok. I just wantto see if the people find out what is actually happening!
Author's Response: what people, James, Sirius, Remus, Peter, and Lily, or Hermione and Ron
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