To be honest, there are to many short sentances in this chapter. I think its good though, and I'm reading on :)

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Cliched rose petals in diners and motel rooms really don't suit Ron and Hermione's relationship at all. The ending of this story with the "surprise pregnancy" was also quite tacky. I felt that you chose what you believe to be romantic for this story rather than remaining true to the characters. I am wondering how old you are? You write like you're very young. Good Effort! Loved the beginning and the not dwelling on dead Harry thing, very entertaining :)

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I am reading you entire story, so I was not intending to review until the end, but I can not resist. There are many spelling and grammar mistakes in this text, particularly this chapter. You should have someone proof read your work! Great plot line though :)

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"Damn, where in the heck did Pig go. That bloody bird.

Got him. And there it goes. Bloody hell, there it goes. Damn, come back. Please. Come back!"

Ahahaha, sounds good so far!

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very sad but very sweet

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Finding Nemo- i was expecting a walk to remember, titantic, casanova, something romantic- but finding nemo (i cant lie that is one of my favs)-lol

Author's Response: one of my favs too.. lol thanks for reviewing!

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Sweet and simple, I liked it. It was better than most of the stuff about weddings and kids!

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A sweet wedding description!

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Well, it was short and simple, which is nice.

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Good, and don't worry, I hope that those who read mature rated fanfics dont get offended!

Author's Response: well yes, i would hope too.

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Sweet. I liked the swimming scene.

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I liked it! Especially his recap of the history between them!!

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Its very sweet!

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Very sweet :)

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I liked it! Sorry, I can't think of anything else to say!

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Very sweet and simple, I like the peace in this story :)

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I liked it! Very short of course, but nice start. Its so easy to amagine that Harry died, he amlost died in DH after all!

Author's Response: i know. i had never written a story where he died, and it was really hard not to put him in the story!

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I love this story. Must continue reading! *states like a mindless zombie*

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i enjoyed it... but i havea question... why name the boy eric??? there is another boy name that would go good with ron and hermione... harry... just my thought... it was really well done once again.

Author's Response: because, i wanted him to be named eric. i think they'll remember harry without naming their son after him. but thanks for the thought.

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That was one long speech :) But I liked it. This story is good. :D

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AWESOME STORY


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That waz a great chapter i enjoyed it grately

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Awww cute. I've almost read all your stories and i gotta say Life as a Muggle is by far my favorite. Keep up the good work.

Author's Response: thanks! yeah, i think it's my favorite too!

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AW.

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awww he does care lol i was good

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