{reviewid: 512670, reviewer: 'Kari'}
23rd May 2005:
I like the general plot of the story, u r a very good riter! But the sudden outburst with Ron doesn't make n e sense. And in other chapters in the story, there are several very overly dramatic moments and then the scene continues as if nothing @ all happened. Keep the emotions on the down-low!!! also i find that the whole marking paragraph thing is extremely annoying, y r u putting that on!!!!??? please stop doing that, it is VERY distracting.
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{reviewid: 501579, reviewer: 'Hoshi%2FIokina'}
14th May 2005:
Whenever i click on "the abnormal dream" it directs me 2 a link that says "u are forbidden" PLEASE TELL ME WUTS WRONG!!!!!!!!
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{reviewid: 267197, reviewer: 'Sparrow'}
16th November 2004:
Ok, you have some good things going for you in your story, but your characters are way too over-emotional. Let them have tolerence and you're good to go!
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{reviewid: 191962, reviewer: 'haylie_lupin'}
16th July 2004:
Cool story, please keep going.
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{reviewid: 144535, reviewer: 'Lucille266'}
30th April 2004:
GOOD STORY
UPDATE SOON
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{reviewid: 114969, reviewer: 'none-'}
10th March 2004:
More more!
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{reviewid: 89455, reviewer: 'Fairy'}
28th December 2003:
plez carry it on !!!
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{reviewid: 89374, reviewer: 'Tam'}
27th December 2003:
OoooOOoo! who is it? great story! update soon plz
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{reviewid: 74436, reviewer: 'FroBoy'}
19th October 2003:
Great story!!!!! Plz update!!!!!
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{reviewid: 60171, reviewer: 'EmmalenaGranger'}
8th August 2003:
Pleas Update i\'m beging u.
can u review mine Harry Potter and the slave of the dark lord
Lol
Emmalena
XXXXXX
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{reviewid: 60172, reviewer: 'EmmalenaGranger'}
8th August 2003:
Pleas Update i\'m beging u.
can u review mine Harry Potter and the slave of the dark lord
Lol
Emmalena
XXXXXX
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{reviewid: 58440, reviewer: 'Alicia'}
2nd August 2003:
forget what i said before, its way better than i thought!
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{reviewid: 47497, reviewer: 'Alicia'}
26th June 2003:
I liked the stoy and all, but there was WAAAY too much crying and hugging.
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{reviewid: 45623, reviewer: 'Megan'}
12th June 2003:
Good Idea! Look forward to reading more!
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{reviewid: 44759, reviewer: 'Julianna'}
5th June 2003:
This is great! Please write more
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{reviewid: 44762, reviewer: 'Vella'}
5th June 2003:
COOL AND AWESOME AND WOW AND GREAT AND I KEEP USING THAT WORD! SORRY BUT I\'M SO HAPPY! YOUR STORY IS AWESOME!
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{reviewid: 44814, reviewer: 'Laura'}
5th June 2003:
I really like the idea of Harry having a twin. (Especially one named Hannah who lives in America with Lupin as a godfather, I mean Lupin? How cool is that??) I never would have come up with it on my own. ^_^ I know all these characters are probably based on your friends but after Hannah and Angel I kind of lost track of who\'s who. Maybe you could cut back a little? Keep writing, you have great potential!!
Best Wishes Always, Laura
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{reviewid: 44701, reviewer: 'Akasha'}
4th June 2003:
hey this is good write more rite more!!!!!!
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